Hmm...interesting writing style, though I didn't really understand any of it. The writing was very vague; it's hard to understand where the characters are at different times, as well as who's speaking. Regardless, there aren't any technical mistakes (spelling, grammar, etc.) as far as I can see, but it's not very descriptive or clear...Sorry if I'm being so forward or strict, I guess it's just the way I am. Report Review
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