you are a very talented writer. i'm excited to see how the plot develops and where the conflict comes into play. its a great start! Report Review
Hmm, an interesting relationship between Snape and your OC. I rather like it. Especially how he began to feel guilty about thinking about Lily, and how he acted repulsed by her romantic gestures but secretly enjoyed them. Very in-character. (: Please do continue. It certainly didn't suck, as you were worried about in your author's note. I'd hate to see you give up after only one chapter.Author's Response: I do plan on updating, I just haven't had much time to work on either of my fanfics, but once the second chapter of my other story is validated, I'll start work on trying to update this, too. I'm very glad that you didn't think it sucked. Phew. lol. Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Report Review
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