i really like this. its been a while since i'v read one like this. its funny but also has a serious side. keep up the good work.

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Don't do that to me :(

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Wow loved it!
Need the sequel now
G2g ring the sequal!

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So good. Is Lily dead? I hope not. I love this story. Please continue.

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This was great, and I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I thought the prank they pulled was absolutley hilarious :)

Author's Response: thanks! happy reading!

L

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is there a sequal there has to be
you left it at a clif hanger I love this story
please write some more
SEQUAL!!!

Author's Response: there is a sequal! its called after shocks and should be on my list of stories!

thanks so much for reading!!!

xoxo
L

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i really didnt get the end.culd u exp a bit

Author's Response: haha yes its a wee confusing. so basically what happened was- lily was kidnapped. the story continues on with the sequel!!

thanks for the review!
xoxo
L

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I love the story so far! But I hate Peter! HATE HIM! Poor Lily! But I love the end of the chapter, how Remus and Cammie sya the same theing, and James and Lily, and Sirius and Genet! It's great! I'm going to keep reading now... :)

Author's Response: i'm so glad you like it!! and it was so hard writing that part about Peter but i think it had to be done. thanks for the review!
xoxo
L

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wow no offense but this story was lame

Author's Response: haha none taken i dont really like it myself

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You NEED to do a sequel or SOMETHING you can't possibly end it like that!
plz. I'm begging
m

Author's Response: there is a sequel!! but i'm thinking of redoing the first story and just adding on the sequel!!
check out the sequel!ad thanks for the review!!
xoxo
L

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make more stuff blow up

Author's Response: haha will do thank you for reviewing!!

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excuse me for my langauge but
holy shit dude
this is an awesome story

Author's Response: haha no worries on the language and thank you so much!
thanks for reviewing!!
L

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hahahahahaha
i loved how lily and Genet woke James and Sirius up

Author's Response: haha yeah that was fun to write! thanks for reviewing!
L

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That was a beautiful story but thats the end??? Is there more???

Author's Response: yes there's more! there's a sequel! it's just not done yet but there are two chapies up!! thanks for the review!

L

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Aaaah! I love when conversations happen in note-form! Great chappie here - the truth is finally out lol.

I like how you lightened the mood after the article with the note-writing in class so that the whole chappie wasnt depressing etc (although, they all got over the news quite quickly lol!)

I really like your writing style - well done on this chapter, my favourite so far :D

Love Pygmy x

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you enjoyed the notes and the chapter! I agree the characters got over the news rather quickly but as time goes on they'll get used to it [sad but thats what it is :(] i'm glad you enjoy the story!!

Thanks for the review!
L

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Great chapter! I think the song really suited the mood of the chapter - and Lily's comforting Genet was really genuine too.

10/10 :D

Love Pygmy

Author's Response: thanks for the support and the review!! I'm glad you liked the song but I believe after that chapter I stopped using songs [ :( or :) i'm not sure!]

again thanks for taking the time to review!
L

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NO! It can't be the end they are supposed to win! Oh well. Stupid people. Great story had me laughing and on the edge of mt seat constantly. Evil pettigrew. Fabulous!
Kat xoxo

Author's Response: who says its the end? and who says they lost? (tip: I'm writing the sequel and the first chapter is up...) I'm glad you enjoyed it and don't judge Peter too quickly you never know what could happen! :oP I'm glad it made you laugh (score! :) and I'm SUPER glad you enjoyed it!! check out the sequel!

Thanks for the review!!
L

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Umm i think you may have switched up the order for chapters 2 and 3. The order of things really does not make any sense and the plot is jumping around. Also on the chapters they say that chapter 3 is actually chapter 2 and vise versa. Just thought you should know.

Author's Response: haha yes that was a mistake thanks for catching it!! Yes chapter two and three are mixed up sorry for the inconvenience ! and thanks for catching my mistake!!

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im so excited about reading the new story
keep up the great work
i really liked the story so far:D

Author's Response: i'm excited too! Thanks for the review and the many others you have written for my stories!!

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Well Exciting Chapter Suspisius Eyes. Scary!

Author's Response: haha thank you!

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Awww. Cute chapter. But I'm so sad about how little it is!

='(

You seriously need some cute scenes between Cami and Remus.

XxLove you darling.

Author's Response: don't worry there will b plenty of cute scenes between Cammie and Remus. I'm sorry it was so short but hey at least its a new chapter right? don't worry i'm working on the next one as we speak!

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welcome back
was wondering where you were
nice chapter

Author's Response: thank you and it's good to be back!

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Awesome chapter. And a great story please write more soon. 11000/10

Author's Response: thanks!!! oh and thanks for the review!!!

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i get the feeling that peter likes lily and thats really creepy
nice chapter i enjoyed it :D

Author's Response: yes peter is VERY creepy. Ha ha keep reading !!! Thanks for the review!!

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This chapter Rocks but please put in what Remus was going to do to James and Sirius. And put Remus getting together with somebody because he is so nice and he totally should.

Author's Response: awww but that's what makes it a mystery! Remus WILL get together with someone..... THNX FOR THE REVIEW!!!

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