{reviewid: 2436512, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
17th November 2010:
i like it but it is just a tad to fast paced. it sometimes pay for u to do that but it can also hurt as i found out with my first story the love that killed a tyrant look it up on here and read the chapter posted. i do however like ur idea just try and slow the story down a little explain some things in better detail. thats the only problem i see and a few grammatical errors but every writer makes those im sure i have some in my new story Harry and Hermione the two heirs of hogwarts im waiting for the chapter validation on that one but if u want read it when it gets validated all in all i give u a nine
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{reviewid: 2278599, reviewer: 'Harlan%20Carter'}
4th January 2010:
Your chapters feel like an action movie. I would love to see you flesh out the details and scenes more. Extremely well done. Love your storylines.
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{reviewid: 2278593, reviewer: 'Harlan%20Carter'}
4th January 2010:
Well written but to quick. Could flesh it out some more, and Beel crumped a little two quick.
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{reviewid: 2182520, reviewer: 'sinwillys822'}
3rd August 2009:
Very interesting can't wait to see what happens next.
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{reviewid: 2123765, reviewer: 'sinwillys822'}
24th May 2009:
Very Cute chapter, i was wondering with the godric rowena comment if that was a good thing that he was amassing a bigger army than voldermort. I think it is good but what is ur opinion.
Author's Response: Its basically still a build up for whatever is to come.
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{reviewid: 2072285, reviewer: 'shanesdragon'}
10th March 2009:
Loved it!
Please update soon
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{reviewid: 2043477, reviewer: 'lovette'}
28th January 2009:
please continue can you tell me if hermione lives forever like harry and nat does
Author's Response: you gotta wait for the story to come out..
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{reviewid: 2000855, reviewer: 'angel_devil_chick15'}
2nd December 2008:
WTF bellatrix siding with harry now that's a first ! btw i love this story
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{reviewid: 1988207, reviewer: 'Richard'}
15th November 2008:
I think your doing a good job with this fic, but I think you may have accidently borrowed some things from other fan-fics. for istance the phenoix spell and the castles of the founders.
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{reviewid: 1981302, reviewer: 'bugz34'}
4th November 2008:
I think you re doing great so far I relly like this story..Keep doing what you are doing..
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{reviewid: 1957926, reviewer: 'kat%20potter'}
8th October 2008:
please continue this story. it is really good. i love how u have developed the plot.
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{reviewid: 1951893, reviewer: 'eepachi'}
27th September 2008:
Is the patronus a stag? Please continue ASAP!
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{reviewid: 1934687, reviewer: 'nicholas'}
27th May 2008:
great story so far cant w8 4 the nex 1
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{reviewid: 1928716, reviewer: 'lovette'}
21st May 2008:
please continue love it
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{reviewid: 1928708, reviewer: 'lovette'}
21st May 2008:
please continue love it
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{reviewid: 1888258, reviewer: 'lovette'}
7th April 2008:
please continue love it
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{reviewid: 1877195, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
26th March 2008:
Wow. He's one rich beautiful sexy person. Wow.Loved this chapter. Please post soon.
Author's Response: I will not be posting that soon for this story just yet as I will be trying to get my other story up to the same number of chapters as this one and then i'll take turns to update the stories..
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{reviewid: 1872168, reviewer: 'Bryan'}
22nd March 2008:
I have been reading this story for a long time and just happened to click on it again I am so happy that you are continuing it can't wait for the next chapters. From what I have read you are doing harry potter stories justice
Author's Response: Thanks..
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{reviewid: 1865311, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
16th March 2008:
hm very interesting. So he can bring people back. Shame its after a month and not years, he could have bought his parents back. post soon.
Author's Response: I may be considering a way for him to be able to alter his powers so he can resurrect people who have died long ago..
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{reviewid: 1865083, reviewer: 'thegillitine'}
15th March 2008:
Excellent and quick read:)
Author's Response: Thanks..
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{reviewid: 1856257, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
7th March 2008:
Awe that poem was sweet.Post soon please.
Author's Response: Haha.. I wrote the poem myself.. Didn't think it would be that nice..
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{reviewid: 1847259, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
28th February 2008:
yayyy they got it on. time to repopulate the gryfindor clan lol
Author's Response: haha..
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{reviewid: 1847253, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
28th February 2008:
yayy alright. wicked chap, short but good.
Author's Response: Thanks..
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{reviewid: 1847250, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
28th February 2008:
Yikes that was brilliant.need more
Author's Response: Will be coming up.. Please read my other story as well. Harry and Michelle.. Thanks..
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{reviewid: 1847248, reviewer: 'Lily_Potter_Evens'}
28th February 2008:
OH very interesting. gotta read more *runs to next chappie*
Author's Response: There will be more interesting parts coming up..
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