Omg, i was like almost in tears!!!

I was scanning through looking for a certain story, when i saw 'We Are Broken' And seeing as Paramore is my favourite band of all time, i was like 'I SO HAVE TO READ IT!' also considering 'We Are Broken' has alot of meaning to me.

Your writing technique is brilliant, i love the way you describe things aswell.

I love how all the characters still seemed to be in character, although they weren't, but i like that. I hate it when stories have all the characters the same all the time and they don't change in the slightest, even by the end of the story, they need a little change! Thats the point in writing your own stories!

I love this story, the song goes very well with it, i'm very happy how well you wrote this, it turned out fabulous! I also performed 'We Are Broken' for a few singing estedfords (competitions), and came first! That's beside the point. (: Haha. But the story goes very well with this song!

Good work love. Keep it up.

Definately 10/10!


xxx
Nicki.

P.S, I have written a song-fic to Paramore's song 'Decoy' if your a fan of Paramore, you might want to check it out!

Bye for now, but not forever. (:

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Aw, it's sweet, and i'm not one for Dramione :)

its great,

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

Nikki

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I liked this
it goes very well with the song!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I felt exactly the same way which is why I left it so short. Thanks for the review!

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I loved it I loved it I loved it! But... you know that, because I read it and approved it before you even posted it! I love working next to and being able to get first read! YAY!! :) You need to do another Song Fic girl!

Author's Response: Actually.....I AM! Surprise, and guess who gets first read?? Thank you for reviewing.

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Awesome! Great Job! This has loads of feelings written into it! Love it!
10/10

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.

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Hi! really moving story! I liked the flashing scenes, emotions, memories. I was very deep. Excellent work! wings

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I saw it as a video in my mind, hence the style I wrote it in.

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