Hello again.
That was a wonderful chapter once more.
I could really see a lot more a Lila's personality shining through here, and I can certainly see where the title 'reluctant hero' comes in.
I like how you integrated Draco into this story. I think you characterised him very well, it's nice to see him portrayed not as EVIL for once. Thanks for that.
Great imagery once more, overall fantasic chapter. I think your writing has somehow improved even between these two chapters. Don't hesitate to tell me when you update, just post it on the thread :)

Rose

Author's Response: Thanks again. I actually have the third chapter in the validation queue, so you got lucky. I will definitely let you know when it is validated. Hope you continue to read.

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Hey there. I've finally come to review at last!
Firstly I'd like to say, that was really good!
At the start it did seem a little disjointed and at points rushed, but I know how difficult (well for me at least) it is to summarise things that have happened when you really just want to get on with the action. ;)
I thought you had wonderful imagery, I could see the room and almost er...feel the atmosphere. It was great.
It's interesting that you've made her father a death eater, I've never read a fic like this, at least not where they know.
It's a great idea, and you could/will go far with this story.
I love the spell, I'm terrible at coming up with them, haha.
Awesome first chapter, Lila seems like she'll be a really interesting character.

Rose

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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A very well written story. As a fellow writer, there are a few points that arent necessary to the writing that would've been nice but all in all, i enjoyed it

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you continue to read.

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I think that this is a very good second chapter. It shows that not all Slytherins sided with the Dark Lord, & that not all of them were cruel. I do hope you keep this story going, & update soon =]

Author's Response: Thank you. I have always thought that the Slytherins had a softer side.

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Pretty good. It is all moving rather quickly. There are a few grammer errors but otherwise the story is really good! I cant wait to read the next chapter. Please post soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. I know it is moving kind of quickly, I wanted to jump straight into the story without a long boring introduction kinda thing. It'll be moving more slowly from now on. I knew there would be errors, I can never get them all. You're in luck, the next chapter is in validation now.

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omg. big cliffhanger...
i absolutely love the feel of this story and can definetly see it being an exciting one.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue reading.

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this is Nor from TWF. Guess this is the best way you can identify me.


Anyways this story is pretty cool. Infact awesome... Youre doing a gr8 job... keep it going ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks Nor. Glad you came from TWF to read =] Definitely will keep going.

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