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Review #1, by granpa harry Donations

17th February 2009:
excellent story.

I cannot believe the amount of people that see something within Draco that JK never shared.

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Review #2, by Pretty Purple Pelican Donations

6th January 2008:
Very cute. I usually don't like it when I don't know who the main character is, but you made it pretty obvious that it was Draco. A word of advice, if you want to make flashbacks neater, you could use italics. The way you did it was just fine, but italics tend to make it more clear. I really loved the little girl's spirit and how open she was to him. I was left wishing, though, that he had fixed what he had done before by giving her a bag of Galleons or something. But very nice job! Thank you for contributing to the challenge :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted it to be obvious, yet not obvious, that it was Draco. Italics, thats a good idea, I'll do that when I update, thanks. Thanks for the review!

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