I loved your style of writing. The story was so deep. I read it twice :^)Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Sorry about the late response, I wasn't on HPFF for a while.
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That was amazing. One of the best Remus one-shots i've ever read =) the way you wrote him was so heartbreaking...poor guy. And I loved the little flashbacks, and the scene with Sirius at the end... *sniff*
10,000,000,000,000,000/10!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it!! The scene with Sirius in the end is my favorite as well. :)
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Love it - of course. Remus is so undeniably human and sympathetic when you write him, and you make us feel every pang that he feels. I thought the memories you included were very well-done and seamlessly added into the narrative. I especially liked the way he met the other Marauders, because in every other story they always meet on the train. The fear and the tension as they began to grow up, have suspicions about Peter, etc. were very well done. My ultimate favorite scene in this story was Remus watching Sirius be sentenced to Azkaban, and the way he remembered the two of them being young and innocent children together. Absolutely heart-breaking. Your stories always have so much depth and beauty to them, and there's always the message that through even the blackest darkness there is always light. Gorgeous 10/10Author's Response: I really wondered a lot about this precise missing moment in Remus' life - the moment when he lost absolutely everything he had. This story was precisely the reason why I struggled a bit with the choice of a moment to choose for the Defining Moments collaboration - it was definitely a turning point in his life.
One of the main reasons why I don't really like reading Marauder stories as well as some Next Gen stories is because so many authors make everyone meet on the train. C'mon, what are the chances to meet all of your dorm mates and become best friends with them all at once?! Canon tells us James and Sirius met on the train and shared a compartment with Snape and Lily. There are little chances they met Remus and Peter before coming to Hogwarts...
The scene you mentioned with Remus watching Sirius being sentenced to Azkaban is my favorite as well - I actually based the entire story on that precise scene. It motivated me to write the entire story in the first place...
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I am in love! Well done, it's difficult to make something both disjointed and readable, but you have so have some eternal love! I like your portrayl of Remus very much, so I will have to read some more of your stuff. Thank you!Author's Response: No, thank YOU for leaving such a wonderful review!! I am so very glad you liked this story! I adore Remus and I had so much fun while trying to get into his head to write this story and I am very happy you liked it so...
Thank you yet again for the read and for taking time to stop by and comment...
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