That was so sweet.
And I love the last line. Amazing.Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this story :] I'll make sure to put more stories like this out around the holidays! Report Review
Wow. Poor Margie, she has a crazy mother.
Great job. This is a very good story. Sad, but I liked it. 10/10
P.S. I loved how you added the picture of the dress. Every story goes into detail about every single part of the dresses, but I can never picture them. Now I just skip the discriptions and assume the girls are wearing very nice ones, lol. But I know what you were talking about.Author's Response: Thanks so much for the postive feedback! I'm so glad that you liked my story.
I'm always really bad at doing details for fancy things. I find it's really hard to imagine things like dresses when people describe them, so that's why I put the picture in.
Thanks again for the feedback! Report Review
I liked your story. I do wonder what will happen when Margie returns home. If her mother was rough before, I hate to think what would happen the next time. Does this abuse have something to do with the Christmas lights no longer being put up? Sounds like another story to me!Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this story! The abuse does have to do with the lights no longer being put up. And actually, I probably could do a sequel to this one if people would read it :) Report Review
I liked this story, but it was a bit confusing with the whole 'Sirius apearring out of nowhere' dealie. And I really didn't know much at all about Maggie, or her life, or anything. Some more explanation would've been nice.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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