{reviewid: 2268299, reviewer: 'Rosa%20Bud'}
15th December 2009:
Cute!!
You're right that the ending was kind of weak - but show some confidence! The banner is cute, and I think it was, in fact, very humorous! Good little christmas story! It certianly got me in the Christmas spirit, no lie. :)
Merry Christmas!
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{reviewid: 1928025, reviewer: 'Galita'}
20th May 2008:
Well, it´s a lot after christmas, but here´s your gift. it was really funny and so Ron to ask all those questions. But, as you say, the end was...a bit short; hope you can fixed...good work..bye
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{reviewid: 1921281, reviewer: 'XxescapingfatexX'}
12th May 2008:
this was a nice little story. i enjoyed it very much. (: but it makes me wish it was Christmas :(
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{reviewid: 1781483, reviewer: 'Anon'}
6th January 2008:
yeah, its father xmas, and kids start pre school when their 2 or 3, they start primary school at 4 or 5 (depends on what time of year they were born). if Rose was 4 then the minute she started school she'd know the whole thing wasn't real so there wouldn't be much point to it but kool story. certainly a nice idea.
oh just one more thing...mione? whats wrong with saying Hermione? its not a name that sounds good when shortened.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the pointers! Sorry if you didn't like it.
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{reviewid: 1767970, reviewer: 'Annie95'}
27th December 2007:
This is a really funny, sweet story! You're doing great! Anyways, I'm writing a story i'm sending to a publishing company...called The Impenturable (meaning the Invincible). do you have any advice for me?
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{reviewid: 1767821, reviewer: 'GriffinClaw'}
27th December 2007:
Very good story. It seems like something that could definitely happen. Ron's reaction to Hermione's story was true to his character. Great job, happy ChrismaHaunaKwanaRamaKa to you too!
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{reviewid: 1767134, reviewer: 'Queen_Silver'}
27th December 2007:
It was cute! I loved reading this and it made me smile. I thought it was really creative to look in on the couple like that. Very cool!
I really liked it.
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{reviewid: 1766784, reviewer: 'RebeccaPotter'}
26th December 2007:
This literally made me smile. Lighthearted and not badly written. Good job!
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{reviewid: 1766257, reviewer: 'rupey_grint_1105'}
26th December 2007:
It was a very cute story!!
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{reviewid: 1766162, reviewer: 'crazygurl17'}
26th December 2007:
lol nice story u sohuld wright another one merry christmas!
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{reviewid: 1766094, reviewer: 'animagusrr'}
26th December 2007:
I actually liked your story. Ron's comebacks at Hermione were very smart and funny in a way. The conversation with Rosie was not carefully written - at least that's what it seemed to me. I know how you can dedicate hours on something and still it will look roughly done..Anyway, the ending was a bit harsh, too. But on the whole, it was a very good try! Keep on writing! 6.5/10
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{reviewid: 1765924, reviewer: 'peguinsmiles'}
26th December 2007:
AWWW! I loved it! And don't worry, the banner is cute as well!
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{reviewid: 1765922, reviewer: 'zrose'}
26th December 2007:
Cute, but I thought you would want to know that in Britan, his name is Father Christmas.
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{reviewid: 1765906, reviewer: 'PotterGeek64'}
26th December 2007:
very sweet. and fluffy :)
I just watched a Christmas episode of Scrubs so now I feel super fluffed up!
Merry (late) Christmas!
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{reviewid: 1765790, reviewer: 'Deadly%20rose'}
26th December 2007:
sweet and nice...i especially liked the conversation with ron. his comments on Santa is funny and made me laugh.
anyway, good job and of course, MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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