This totally had me sucked in from the very first line! It all flowed so beautifully one part into the next and was so well written! It was a beautiful piece and I hope that you haven't given up on this story as you did a great job writing the start of it. Also the last paragraph was so beautifully sad and just portrayed their emotions so well. I think you did a great job painting this sad beginning for the readers because it was so easy for me to visualize everything. It was great from the very first word to the very last word of this chapter. Great Job.
~Slytherin~Author's Response: -blush- Thank you very much! No I haven't given up on this, its more of a 'why did I start this so early' problem. It goes with Creperum, but I was so eager to get this started that I didn't think about the plot in Creperum very much and how much it would be spoiled if this progressed too far too early. Thank you for the review hon! Report Review
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Well, I will be sincere... I first chosen this one because there was Johnny Depp on the banner ( another obsession of mine..hm,hm...), but the chapter was really great! You should really continue this.:)
~MommyAuthor's Response: This is one I hope to pick up again, though I admit I started it far too soon since it goes hand in hand with a few other stories. Report Review
this is a really great chapter! i really hope you update asap!!!Author's Response: To be honest, I'm not sure when I'll be able to update again. I try to rotate the stories so that one doesn't get updated more than another, but you can probably tell that the muses don't always let that be. I hope to have this updated at least once before my trip this summer. Thanks for the review! Report Review
wow, love it :) always liked vampire storys, so together with Sirius must be great :D please update. please (A)..
question: do you take long to update
comment: update :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked this. It gave me a few problems here and there. And another vampire fan! More and more of us are appearing lately. elnouk, I hate to say it, but I do take time between updates. I have several other stories that I'm writing, I validate the stories that are seen on this site, and I'm a full-time college student. So I write when I can, but I try not to go to long without updating something. If you'd like, I can email you when I update this story, so you'll never miss a chapter. Report Review
Ochay first things first. MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE! Ok now on to spelling, Mentally (prepairing) the verbal lashing she would be giving her bosses, If you've got questioins or (commetns) (whoopsies). Um that is really all i could find after a second time through.
Yay I really like fun christmas presents like this. Plus I really like the idea of Sirius/Selene and because you see a little of it through Creperum, its really fun to see it as a whole and as the main part of a story. Thanks so much for the dedication! I really like the title that you picked. Thank goodness people can think of really good titles. I like how it shows some stuff about their relationship before you really learn about. It is a great chapter and I cant wait for the next chapter to come up. Its not very often that a great chapter or story comes up. Great characters, great idea, great story! I love Creperum, and I love Sirius and Selene so you did AWESOME!
*Lisa Kae*Author's Response: Merry Christmas a day late, Lisa! *kicks spell check* Thanks for pointing those out, though if it weren't for you, there would be more mistakes. You and I talk about this story so much, I don't want to leave a really huge review. Thank you again for all your help, I really appreciate it!! Thanks again, darlin! Report Review
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