It seems to have been a while since you had a reivew. I'll fix that. I love its playful, lightheartedness and the last sentence was the perfect closing line. The RANDOM STORY link brought me here, and it was definitely not a waste of time. We knew who the Mauraders were, but it isn't touched on how Gred and Forge found out. I love this li'l additition to the wonderful wizarding world. Thanks! Report Review
haha, i like to imagine that they worked out who moony, wormtail, padfoot and prongs were. that was really well written :DAuthor's Response: Thank you very much. :) Report Review
your actually kidding me! i swear i reviewed this chapter at least 10 times. no exxageration included. lol but i'm just desperatly trying to remember what i said... *goes off to think* oh right, well i think i said that i loved the way fred and george found out about everything, it was a really neat (excuse the pun) and fun way of them finding out. no death included. i like that. no death. hehe, but seriously! by the way, the whole pond thing, i loved the way you described it! so nice!! anyway, my mother is waiting to take me swimming, i'm late, got to go! well done! it was amazing! and funny! i want a chapter 2 missy!
lots of love
netiAuthor's Response: Good old Gred and Forge. You should have known that I wouldn't include a character death with these two in it, and watch what you are insinuating missy. I do not kill of all of the characters. In fact I can't remember the last time I killed off anyone.
The whole pond thing? You mean the swamp? I got my inspiration from the PS2 game for OotP, it is really cool on that.
Anyways, you're not getting a chapter two. I labelled this a one-shot for good reason. Besides, how could I carry it on, it is just a drabble.
P.S. Sorry for deleting your fav story. Report Review
Cool... I really like it, especially the part where Sirius talks about Wormtail giving a love potion to Snape that made him confess his love for Narcissa... lol... Great work!Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
I loved this! (And I honestly mean that). I love stories about the Marauders, or Fred and George, and this one was so light-hearted, so I absolutely love it! I really liked how you elaborated on how the swamp works; I don't think even I could do that! And I really liked the last sentence, "Mischief managed". Great job!Author's Response: I'm with you on the Marauders and the twins point of view. As you may have guessed the twins are my favourite characters *points to penname* :)
Well I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I really did enjoy thinking up a way for the swamp to work without it being too complicated, though I have to admit that I was inspired partially by the swamps in the OotP PS2 game :P
Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your review. Report Review
This story made me smile. Thanks! :)Author's Response: Good old smiles :) Thank you for your review. Report Review
This was great
I'm glad you took up my challengeAuthor's Response: Glad you found it funny. Thanks for popping by and reviewing! Report Review
This story is great! Then troublemakers of today meet the troublemakers of the past. Great work!Author's Response: Thank you very much. Report Review
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