7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by hprbdfan Sadness Within Tormented Green Eyes

23rd February 2008:
aw that's sad great job though!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.

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Review #2, by ev11000 Sadness Within Tormented Green Eyes

23rd February 2008:
absolutely love it the symbolism and near poetic manor is incredible seems like an epic in a few lines perfect

Author's Response: Thank you! You are very kind.

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Review #3, by MoonyandProngs Sadness Within Tormented Green Eyes

22nd February 2008:
Great story! Although the thought of Harry joining Voldemort scares me! Great work!

Author's Response: thanks for the review.

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Review #4, by De_mocker Sadness Within Tormented Green Eyes

15th February 2008:
OH MY GOD...that was one of a kind, why don't you write a story out of it, although some parts are tricky like;

(a) giving him voldemorts wand?

(b) rons jealousy and hermione's forgiveness...

(c) harry sacrificing his soul?

(d) killing voldemort with a gun?

(e) the burrow? wouldnt they move if they knew harry would give up himself?

But I digress, (laughs) im just ranting away like a madman forgive me...I do like it though. its a awesome idea, such great thoughts can only lead to even greater stories.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #5, by Rose Wilts Sadness Within Tormented Green Eyes

1st January 2008:
Hey 'The gillitine;, since you were nice enough to leave a review for my story I decided to check out some of your work. When I first started reading I thought 'what the heck? harry wouldn't want absolute power', but then I continued on and finally got it. Hehe. I have to say It's a brilliant idea and quite well written, but at times it did tend to sound a little like a summary. It wasn't cliche at all, but I think that you could easily extend this chapter. Overall I enjoyed it. :)

Author's Response: I'll see what I can do.

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Review #6, by xxx_firesparks_xxx Sadness Within Tormented Green Eyes

29th December 2007:
aww awesome ! :) i like it

love lou

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing.
At first, I wasn't going to respond to reviews for this little one-shot, due to the entire feeling of this story. That's why it took so long to respond.


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Review #7, by auror_snape Sadness Within Tormented Green Eyes

24th December 2007:
Not bad. It was really sad, and you were getting repetitive, but other than that, it was okay. And I can so see Voldemort making like Caesar. That was well-written. And did Hermione ever know Harry loved her more than life itself? Could she see the pain in his eyes at the end?

Author's Response: I will try to fix those problems, or, at the very least, apply your comments to your future writing.

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