This is really great. You are doing a great job of managing several different plot lines, like making them relate and not over-doing one. This story has gone in a completely different direction than what I first imagined it would, but I love it! Keep up the awesome work, I'm hoping you update soon! :)

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I can't wait for the next installment. I

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your Snape is kinda OCC. make him more in universe. LOVELY STORY!

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O.o a pity kiss? Are you kdding me sev!?!?!

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Oooh! i love hermione! She is so funny. And you can tell sev really likes her in that conversation. If anyone BUT she said that they would have been stupified to kingdom come! Lol

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Aw! Frank and alice have theh,yre memories back agaun!;)

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Never knew luna could be so seductive! Lol!

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Just one word. AMAZING! YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER!

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Me forth! Hahaha this is amazing! I really cannot believe how talented you are! You mustve rocked at the nanoramo thingy! Lol! Keep up he good work! You are amazing!

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Ooh smart reaction! I love sev! 'Ill be alble to tell by your reaction... no need to tell me!' Omg this is an amazing chapter! I am so glad that i have the opportunity to read such an admiral story! You have just enough plot linees! Im glad you added the emma and jake baxter thing. It couldve got somewhat boring if sev was teaching and it was just a relationship with mione and him! Lol! Love you are your story!!! Keep it up! I will for sure read every book you write!

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Ive had personal expirience from wat emma describes... and i found myself not trusting everybody until my best friend found out about it. Sort of like in here... except... she witnessed it personal from the rwal intender. So i know exactly how emma is feeling!

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Why would he be going to ascaban? Hes just tutoring thie child. Did he kill his parents?

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Its so sad that sev can totally relate! Btw.. awesome chapter! Is snap/granger coming soon?;)

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Its jinda confuzing... jack and jake... i keot having to remind myself who was who... i know its prolly too late to change it.. but.. just a suggestion. But anyway.. this was an amazing chapter and hope u dont loose interest in writing this book! Lol thank you for coming up with this plot. Its really interesting that you kinda have a couple different plots going on... truthfully... if you had written a story just on emma and jack or jake..whichever ine it iz... i prolly never would have found this! But im glad i found it... even if it was only because of hermuone and sev lol! Good luck on other chapters as well!

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Ooh... whats wrong? And how do mione and sev have a relationship if he is professor at hogwarts?

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Poor emma! Does she feel cheated out? Does her father beat her?

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They are friends again! Yay!;)

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Very intimate lol! Sev and mione would be perfect! They should start to realise they are in love very soon i hope!

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Haha;) snape is fnally warming up to littly teddy! Aww how cute! But molly is probably going to notice a missing cookie lol!

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Is sev gonna be there too? Great stor. Keep up good work!

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Grrr snape! That was cruel! Poor jake! What if hermione showed up? Hmm?

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At all costs?*gulp* thanks again for writing this wonderful story!

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Snape sure has changed! For the better! Lol! But she shouldve invited him in...

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Sad break up for ron... but it was inevitable! Besdes... he shouldnt of gotten drunk. He seems so dumb in this chapter... good work!,

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Eh...she shouldnt of made love with. him... but other than that..m this chapter was bloody awzome!

!SO? KEEP WRITING LOL

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