3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by imellen The year 1500

6th February 2008:
Oh… I think I’ll like this story much… there are a lot of darkness here… well, it’s only a chapter, of course there are a lot of darkness. All I hope is the ArchLord isn’t Dumbledore… I don’t know why this came to my mind. Well, that’s my silly imagination. Keep on writing. And of course update soon, please.
Oh yes, maybe a suggestion. I think the break up between Ron and Hermione is so simple. I do hope more. I mean, maybe the reasons. Mm, I hope you understand what I mean. And then, what about Ginny? You still don’t explain that much. Well I know you can’t explain many things in one chapter. I’m sorry. I mean, I hope I can hear that part. And then, which parts don’t happen in book 7.
Oh, I’m sorry to be a mouthful person. I’m really curious about this story. ^_^.

Author's Response: Hah. Was nice to read that. Sorry that I haven't updated in basically forever. It wasn't that I forgot about this, I've just been busier than anything. I'm trying to work on the newest chapter.

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Review #2, by imellen The year 1500

6th February 2008:
Oh… I think I’ll like this story much… there are a lot of darkness here… well, it’s only a chapter, of course there are a lot of darkness. All I hope is the ArchLord isn’t Dumbledore… I don’t know why this came to my mind. Well, that’s my silly imagination. Keep on writing. And of course update soon, please.
Oh yes, maybe a suggestion. I think the break up between Ron and Hermione is so simple. I do hope more. I mean, maybe the reasons. Mm, I hope you understand what I mean. And then, what about Ginny? You still don’t explain that much. Well I know you can’t explain many things in one chapter. I’m sorry. I mean, I hope I can hear that part. And then, which parts don’t happen in book 7.
Oh, I’m sorry to be a mouthful person. I’m really curious about this story. ^_^.

Author's Response: I'll reply to this one. =D Anyway, sorry for only doing a chapter and not doing more, but school has kept me busy. But thanks for the positive review, I wasn't sure of putting this one up. I will try writing some stuff tonight.

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Review #3, by YamiLogan The year 1500

12th January 2008:
Hmm, I like it. Reminds me of a certain movie for some reason. Not too sure why. Well, I hope you continue with this even if you don't get reviews.

Author's Response: Thanks. I was going to do the next chapter but I have been busy with exams. Gotta study hard...not doing too well currently.

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