Oh, oh! So bittersweet and sad, my stomach was twisting, oh. So wonderful, this was so beautiful. I really, really loved it. And you definitely made me smile at the end, which was YAY! And, oh, also. Not to be all silly and self-advertising (oh, am though.) you know how you reviewed one of my stories (like breathing under water) and you gave me constructive criticism? Well I changed it to suit, and I REALLY LIKE IT. So thankyou, thankyou, thankyou. Can you read it and tell me whether or not you approve? You already helped me heaps, so I'd absolutely adore you both to Heaven and back if you did! Thankyou!
(And thankyou for the very, very gorgeous slash, even if I did nearly cry when Draco cheated.)
icefire (teehee lol) 6969/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was worried it came off as too fluffy or something.
But I went and checked out your story and it's great. Good job! Report Review
that was good
i'm most definatly not a draco/harry shipper but it was a very cute little story, lovely writing styleAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
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