i can just imagine Mr. Malfoys {Draco's} face, shock, love this story

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As always 10/10 doll and I"m glad you updated since the last time i read this story :)

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will he betray pax and go after hermione?? 9/10 =]

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nice chapter
so i wonder if hermioen will like draco

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Great story.I love it.Please update ASAP.

Author's Response: a chapters coming. but the waiting periods a bit long now so I might wait it out a bit

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haha!! i wonder how they will react in the morning?? 9/10 =]

Author's Response: yes. that will be interesting

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it bothers me that you switch in between first person and third person. like in one sentence hermione will be the narrator and in the next, it will be like an outsider

Author's Response: sorry. I wrote most of this stuff a long time ago when I wasn't so "person" savvy...it gets better as the chapters progress.

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hahahahah
that was hilarious
oh hermione is in for a surprise that was brilliant !

Author's Response: thank you I did bring out the comedy a bit

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oh you devil you! That last part was WAY too juicy ;)

keep going!!

Author's Response: haha okay.. believe me it gets a bit more juicy..

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I LOVE PAX! he's so sweet, if hermione ends up with Draco in the story you should write one where she ends up with pax

Author's Response: yea i might do a spin off. or an alternate ending thingy

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But she doesn't like him, she likes Draco =)
Good writing- interesting story! Keep it up! 9/10

Author's Response: thankyou! we shall see...

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HAHAAHHHAH i loved how you finished off with "eww, he's staring at me" bahahhahaha loved it. that was the best line

Author's Response: yes. I was going for a kick of laughter at the end...thankyou!!:)

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talk about unexpected! he sounds hot...have you read city of ashes? well, there's a character in it called Jace, and that's who i pictured...*sheepish smile*

Author's Response: YES. I LOVE those books. I'm waiting for a copy because I didn't feel like spending tons of money on the third one.

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nothing happened, much...hang on! did you say blaise? i love blaise! oh, darling, i'm coming! next chapter, please!

Author's Response: yes...this chapter was a bit of an intermission

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*cheers and claps* good one, hermione! i, personally, would have gone for his...ahem, you-know-where, but the nose works, too!

Author's Response: yes..well I decided that the "jewels" should remain in tact for now...;)

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first day there...not too bad. what was with the way-too-tight hug between her mum and lucius? there isn't something...going on, is there?

Author's Response: no. ewww hope not..that would be nasssty

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yay! no cliffie! i laughed at the end. it would be a bit odd if the person you hated most in the world was staring at you...and staring...okay i want to know what happens next. onwards...march!

btw! i had a question. if lucius and jane are cousins, does tht make hermione and draco second cousins?

Author's Response: you will see...

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okay, what is it with people, the month of april, and cliffhangers?! i mean, i know you didn't write this chapter this month, but ages ago, still! every story i've read this month has ended the chapter i read with a cliffhanger! yes, it is suspenseful, painfully so, but, does it have to come when readers are so into the story?

oh my god! i'm sorry! i ranted, and i shouldn't have. i'm gonna shut up before i shove my foot any further into my mouth. great story, anyway...i'm favouriting, and going onto the next chapter, so i hope that makes up for my annoying rant (i get carried away at times...oh, alright, most of the time...)

Janan

Author's Response: haha thanks for favoriting! I rant in comments too.or start talking to myself.heheh

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Aww Pax and Hermione are so cute,
but she's also getting more 'acquainted' with Draco.
hmmm?? love it!
:Dani

Author's Response: hmm is right...we shall see, we shall see

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Naww!! that was great!! 9/10 =]

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Yay im glad they are finally going back!
:Dani

Author's Response: yay someone is reading my story!!! haha there was like a 2 month lull of no one reading it

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Yeah, draco needs to be jealous be so much more interesting to read about

Author's Response: haha ok. ;)

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please do more i am so into this story i wanna no what happens next!

Author's Response: thanksyou very much..I will probably write more

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i love this story. I can't wait for you to write more

Author's Response: thanks.I'll be sure to write some more

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well that was definitely an interesting chapter i wonder whats going to happen now espcially with them going to different institutions of magic and wonder what kind of trouble they are going to face that was a nice chapter

Author's Response: thanks so berry mucho

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