The story is great. For example the dream that Ron's having seems to happen (literaly). It kind of gave me a feeling of déja vu but its funny

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Very nice story, not about herminone mom's but about ron and her. It was nice seeing them hook up.

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I like it, but not as much as your R/S one-shot. It's cute and fun and quite sad, but it doesn't flow very well. Work out the little kinks and it could be brilliant!

9/10
kbav

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestions. I wrote it awhile ago, but I've never gotten around to trying to edit and improve it, though I probably will at some point!

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this was good! i got kind of confused, but i realized what was going on. you should have let them continue, it would have taken hermione's mind off of her mum.

10/10

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very cute. I like it! Ron must have had a terrible case of Deja Vu.

Author's Response: Yeah, hehe, I don't know if he even thought about it...he may have. I feel like that all the time though...hehe. Thanks fore reading and reivewing!

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I love that 'What's cancer?' bit. I know it really wasn't supposed to be funny, but it was. Just a thought.

Author's Response: Haha fair enough...I didn't know if they'd have it int he Wizarding world, so I decided to just have it that they didn't.
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i disliked the cancer subplot. i didnt feel it was especially subtle or needed for the story. sorry!
the rest was nice though.

Author's Response: fair enough, I don't even know why I put that in there...
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Oh, that was cute and sad. I LOVE IT!!!

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