Dang, this story's awesome! Her and Sirius have an...interesting relationship. lol
Can't wait for an update!
PS: Your description is AMAZING. Keep up the good work! Report Review
Great chapter, once again.
I can't wait to read the next one! Report Review
i like the way this story is going so far.
i enjoy reading it.
update soon! Report Review
This is getting interesting.
Can't wait to read more :)
Please update soon! Report Review
Hi, it's Tash from MNFF. *hugs* I look forward to reading the other chapters of the story and you've done well with an interesting first chapter. =) Report Review
great story i cant wait to read what happens next i bet this jordanna girl will be in gryfindor or mabey even slytherine witch is my best house have fun wrighting the next chapter i will be watching for a new chapter -thanxAuthor's Response: Thanks :) And you'll see what house she will be sorted into in the next chapter. Thanks for the review. Report Review
aw, that's so sad how she's forced to do that :(
but this is a great story so far.
i can't wait to read more!
amazing job :) 10/10.
please update soon!Author's Response: Yeah, it is, but if Adelaide didn't do what she did, I wouldn't have a story :P
Thanks for the review; I'll update as soon as I can. Report Review
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