I love this story so much! This is probably the best story i have read on here so far. please write more chapters:)

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this is really good- it made me laugh a lot :)
it was an interesting first chapter and i can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I have part of a chapter already written on the computer (: x

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cute chapter u have here and i liked how James asked Lily that question. by the way, what's NaNoWriMo? i'm not english so i never heard of it. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: NaNoWriMo is National Novel Writing Month. 50,000 words in 30 days :) there's a website :)
I'll do my best, I'm going to update a few of my other stories first :)

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I love this chapter, it's great, please update, really, really soon?! 10/10!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I just posted the new chapter :)

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haha he asks her out when she's at his beside. how cute :) and how very unsubtle of sirius at the beginning of the chapter. awesome and very amusing chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you ^_^

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haha So cute. Post more soon XD

Author's Response: I'll have the next chapter up by the end of the week hopefully (yn)

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James needs to have more focus instead of always thinking about Lily despite she being his girlfriend. they are one of my favourite pairs. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'll do my best.

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lmfaooo a basooma!!
and aw i loved it =]
update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you ^_^
I'll do my best.


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I like it but its got alot of grammarital mistakes and ive no idea why it was called to be like Peter Pan

Author's Response: I've never been much good at grammar tbh lol. Because she says that the wants to be like peter pan ^.^

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“No sir. Sirius was there, he makes enough trouble for the two of us.” James answered.
“Who’s Sirius?” Mum asked, “You’re dog?”

LOL!
NICE!
HAHHAAHAHA
I want to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks (: I\\\'m working on the next chapter just now ^.^

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i liked the reactions of Lily and James' friends about their relationship. and also James and Lily are one of my favourite pairs. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you (: Ill do my best to get it up within a week ^.^

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the part of Petunia telling the family about her engagement was funny because of what Lily said. also finally, Lily and James are dating properly and not because of Petunia.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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I love this story, it's great!!! I'm so glad Lily and James are together!! James's Parents are so nice, but I don't like Lilys family!!! Please update really soon!!! 10/10!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Im posting the next chapter tonight hopefully (yn)

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hehe amazing chapter. . . poor lily though. .. great chapter update soon. . . .

Author's Response: Im almost finished the next one, maybe a few more hundred words and then Im posting it.

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:D:D:D

EMMA! I absolutely LOVED this!! XD
It was amazing! I loved the arguement and how James and Lily have changed and can stand each other now :D
Awesome chapter!! :)

x Kayleigh x

Author's Response: Thanks Kayleigh XDXD
xx

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wow i like this fanfic! its really good and i LOVE the lake thing LOL

Author's Response: Thanks (: it's one of my favourite bits (:
xx

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i officially love this story! so cute. some parts are a little cliche but i still love them the same :P keep it up :D

Author's Response: Thanks (: I hate cliches but I hardly notice them sometimes :L

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good chapter. . . loved it. . . cant wait to see what happens next. . . i have some advise for u though. . . the way u space the chapter makes it kind of hard to read maby you should put spaces bettween ur paragraph and when u chance scenes or skip time put like a line or something that will make it easier for ur readers to read and enjoy the chapter much more. . . other than that i loved the chapter and cant wait for more! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll have a look over it after the next chapter is posted. (:

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this is getting very interesting. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'm not even sure :L I was hoping to but exams and going out have gotten in the way. No excuse, sorry but I'll update soon (: xx

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Yey!! I LOVE this story Emma!! XD
And this chapter was awesome :D
Update soon (Y)

xxx

Author's Response: Thank you (:
I will. Next saturday (yn)

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heheh poor lily. .. sucks 4 her. .. hate petunia. . . kool chapter update soon!

Author's Response: :L thanks. I will (:

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o painful into the lake
ahaha not so happy now eh lily

nioce chapter

Author's Response: :L Thanks

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nice introduction
okay just a few things just keep spelling and the grammar in check other then that i really enjoyed lily's personality. and i loved the name that she gave them

Author's Response: Okay, I can't spell :P :L Thank you!

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AAHH!! Poor James! In a way it's kind of her fault! I loved it! Please update soon! :7)

Author's Response: Yeah, in a way.

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Two weeks?! That seems a bit long... I loved it! :7)

Author's Response: Yeah, maybe it is. I think I might get Lily to find a spell to shorten the time.

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