Aw that was so sad... You wrote it really well though. Good job, Gumby. ^_^ Report Review
... that described the atmostphere so well... poor Joe... Report Review
Joe died?! I heard something about that on the forums just before VH went offline, so I was a little confused...
Anyway, this was beautiful! The way you have written it makes it seem that Cimber\'s mind is simply numb and blank with the shock, and that his friend\'s death makes him think about his own life, and whether there is any point in living. I enjoyed reading it, and you\'re a great fic-writer, keep up the good work!
- Kiari Makal
((I swear I\'m going insane with not roleplaying on VH for so long...when will this torture end?!)) Report Review
Aw.....this is so sad.....
But nice one..... Report Review
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