This story was adorable and well-written. Great work! Report Review
really liked it
was entertaining and the characterization of Lucius was accurateAuthor's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lucius/Narcissa is one of my top pairings. Report Review
There are some really lovely and sweet ideas in this story :) I love the whole subject of Narcissa putting up the decorations manually, and the way in which Lucius reacts throughout made me laugh. I think you really got his proud, proper demeanour across but the use of his narrative also shows how much he cares about her.
I also like how Narcissa wasn't all made up. I think some conventions about her character are broken here and make her all the more believeable, and at the same time just illustrates the closeness they share.
It's a really well written one-shot :) You should be proud. Keep it up!
~ SaintAuthor's Response: Thanks! I've never read a Lucius/Narcissa fic, so I had no idea really how they were portrayed in fanfic, but I really liked how this turned out. It seemed really natural to write Lucius the way I did… So different from Draco, and yet so similar in a strange way. Thanks again for the great review!! Report Review
Aww that was soo cute and funny:DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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