{reviewid: 2277445, reviewer: 'witchchild'}
1st January 2010:
cheez...much cheeZ. but i enjoyed it. could be more graphic, but it's ok :)
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{reviewid: 2271276, reviewer: 'Serpentinia%20Malfoy'}
21st December 2009:
Loved it, I added it to my favorites, keep writing I like your style ;)
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{reviewid: 1775620, reviewer: 'inn'}
2nd January 2008:
Ok not a very innovatibe idea
but good storytelling
i hope for another story written as well with a more innovative idea
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{reviewid: 1768564, reviewer: 'kissedbyavampire'}
28th December 2007:
well, that was okay. but i think that you could have had draco make a comment about her shirt, you know? and if they're only friends at the beginning, why did she crawl on top of him?
8/10
kbav
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{reviewid: 1767528, reviewer: 'ihs'}
27th December 2007:
AWE, cute, i love it!
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{reviewid: 1766819, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
27th December 2007:
A story never to forget! It was nice!
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{reviewid: 1762610, reviewer: 'K%20B%20Lynne'}
23rd December 2007:
aw! that was really cute! i liked it! 10/10
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{reviewid: 1762152, reviewer: 'HannahGranger'}
22nd December 2007:
very cute.and other then a few typos you write very well!
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{reviewid: 1761827, reviewer: 'Sweet_Stuff_1988'}
22nd December 2007:
A really sweet short christmas story :-)
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{reviewid: 1761824, reviewer: 'gotta%20get%20on%20with%20life'}
22nd December 2007:
It was nice but you should have given more history about why Hermione liked Draco so much.
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{reviewid: 1761785, reviewer: 'comeon359'}
22nd December 2007:
it was good but a bit short if yu want to get more reviews and reads have the same story but long if yu want anyway
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{reviewid: 1761729, reviewer: 'Dru%20Dreams'}
22nd December 2007:
The story was pretty good, but the ending seemed a little rushed compared to the beginning. Otherwise it was pretty good.
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