2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Jess A New Storm

25th April 2008:
I really like this opening. It's very dramatic and well-written, and Kaylin has a lot of potential as a character. No other comments yet, but I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one!

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Review #2, by Lupinsmoonlitsweetheart A New Storm

27th December 2007:
good job so far, keep on writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have a few more chapters done so far that I'm going to add as soon as possible. Appreciate the review

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