That was really cute. But I was confused at first that some of the paragraphs were passages from her diary until I went back and read it over a couple of times. Maybe you could put those in italics and the lyrics in bold italics or put "Dear Diary," before each one. Just something to make it more clear that those are the diary entries. But other then that, fantastic job!Author's Response: That's a good idea. I didn't really think of that until now. I'll look into that. I'm glad you like the story. Report Review
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