awe this is so cute, i love hermione/zabini love stories. there should be more of them :/Author's Response: yes i agree. they are a fun pair! thanks so much! Report Review
wow. ur writing never ceases to amaze me. its just so beautiful in its own way. it touches you. thanks for providing me with a afternoon ful of reading your awesome storiesAuthor's Response: thank you for spending an afternoon reading my work! im glad you liked this piece! Report Review
I liked that. There's not too many well-written Blaise/Hermione fics and I thought this was very good. I love that portrayal of Blaise; his intelligence, grace, looks, haughtiness (Is that a word?lol). It was very well done.
The short story/history behind it was good, too. About them being partners and hating it, etc...
Blaise planned the whole thing! Ah, it was great.
xCNxAuthor's Response: thanks so much! im very pleased you liked it!! Report Review
this is a sexy and yet still really adorable piece. I like it!Author's Response: thank you so much Report Review
I can't tell you how much I love this story...
LOvely banner, as well.
xxAuthor's Response: thank you so much hun Report Review
hahaha. This story is sooo cute and funny.
But why stop it there? continue?Author's Response: thank you darling. glad you liked it Report Review
Very nice. I thought you played off of their emotions well. Great job! 10/10 ~JenAuthor's Response: thank you - im glad you enjoyed it Report Review
So is this pure lust, or is love behind it. Because it seems more lovy at the end... However.I do like this story. You make so many! I'm more of a Twilight Writer, so. But I do enjoy visiting your page, as guilty as I feel, and I get a dose of the best HP FF.Author's Response: lol this was just a little fun. they had a moment ^_^
aww thanks hunny. i feel all warm inside *blushes* come back anytime!! Report Review
another amazing one hitter.
right out of the park!Author's Response: thank you sweets Report Review
Cutest Story ever :)
I love the whole Blaise/Hermione stories.
Almost as good as Dramione's :)Author's Response: thank you hun ^_^ im glad you enjoyed it. cute was what i wanted with this Report Review
omg Blaise sounds so HOTT!, im swooning imagining it.
your a fantastic writer.
cheers, kellyAuthor's Response: teehee i love blaise.
thanks kelly!! *hugs* Report Review
i loved it. I loved it. did i mention that i loved it?Author's Response: teehee thank you ^_^ Report Review
that was extremely good! the entire thing was well written and hermione was pretty realistic. basically all i can say is that i really, really liked it “On the floor? How very … muggle of you.” i love that line. there were just somethings i picked up on...
he had keep close to himself
It was my dreams becoming reality; my hallucinations become flesh.
his hands sliding under my ribs
shirt?...im assuming :)
very elaborate set-up
elaboratleyAuthor's Response: thanks hun. glad you enjoyed it.
eeek! typos. thanks for picking those up!
^_^ cheers! Report Review
That was really really good. I love Blaise/Hermione stories i really wish it was a main pairing on this site. But anyway, this was really good, keep up the great work. 10/10Author's Response: thanks love and yeah, it should be - he's become quiet popular xD Report Review
GAH! I LOVED it! It was well written, Hermione's character was wonderful, the plot was brilliant and blah blah blah... I'm sure you have heard it all before :)
Keep up the good work! This story is one of my favs!
10/10Author's Response: lol thanks love! glad you liked it!! Report Review
I liked the pace of the story and the confusion Hermione goes through deciding between Blaise and Ron. Overall good job :)Author's Response: thank you ^_^ Report Review
I Loved it!
It's quirky, funny and Blaise is just so totally HOT!
Great fun to read!
10/10Author's Response: isn't he just? i love writing him ^_^
thanks hun Report Review
'I hated him for being so bloody perfect. His casual grace annoyed me. His intelligence annoyed me.'
That *points above* was my favourite line of the story! It was a lovely story and I loved your descriptive work of. Good job on it! I also love how you've portrayed Blaise - very mysterious but unusually open about it too (to us - not Hermione!) Great work again! I feel so sorry for Ron now! Ah well... he'll get over it! 10/10Author's Response: heheee ron will get over it...actuallly, i don;t care if he doesn't...not a ron fan ^_^
thank you hun - im so glad you enjoyed it!! i love writing blaise! Report Review
aww... i loved it... absolutely loved it!! you def. have talent... great job!
10/10 =]Author's Response: thank you ^_^ Report Review
Short and sweet.Loved it.Author's Response: thanks ^_^ Report Review
Omg, that was ... brilliant!
It was hot, it really was. And I liked every word of it :D
I'm going to put this into my favorites and I'll give you 10/10!
AviajaAuthor's Response: thank you Aviaja! i;'m glad you liked it ^_^ Report Review
hehehe this made me giggle like an idiot =P
I seriously am in love with Blaise, you always write him so well!
You should definately write more Blaise stories, i'm serious!
Amazing job 10/10 =DAuthor's Response: yay! so pleased you liked it hun!! it was fun to write - light and silly!! blaise has become a fav to write, due to TDKY, so you may well see more of him here ^_- Report Review
Haha, well done.
Loved it muchly.Author's Response: thanks hun ^_^ Report Review
I still think the way you write is fantastic. It reminds me a lot of CelticKisses' style, but you do definitely have your own twist that makes it your own, you know? There are a couple of things that bothers me about this story though.
For one, I think this is a great story for a kind of branch out one-shot that relates to another one of your stories. I'm aware that as a one-shot, you probably didn't have it in your head for background to be a main issue to focus on, but it seems like your story is picked up out of nowhere. I think it would be fabulous if it was kind of a side-along of another story that explains the whole thing further, do you get me? At the same time, I do think there was kind of a cute charm about how everything was like it was all in motion, you know?
I'm probably a little biased since I really like slow-moving relationships and I enjoy reading them more, though I can tell that's not really the same for you. ^__^
I think I read another review of yours that claimed you had pretty clever little quips in here, and I have to say that I agree. ^___^ I love how you don't over-do it and keep it nice and subtle. Once again, personal preference, I know, but you can't really take personality out of much, can you?
So pretty much: all in all, it was a good story. I think with your stories (not to be taken offensively) your writing is what takes me in, more than the story itself you know? I think that's great and I would love to have that just because you can succeed in almost anything. But I'd say that you as a general author should work on expanding your area. I mean I definitely see a variety, but not a huge one, you know?
And with my love of slow-moving relationships that aren't quite as physical, and my love of your amazing writing, I would just go crazy with a combination of the two, so I might just be egging you on for my own pleasure. ^__^ All the same, experimenting is good on all scopes, right?
And very much unrelateed to the rest of this review, your banners are fantastic. ^___^ I drool over like half of your graphics back at TDA. ^_^
Amazing story, once again!
-Selina Author's Response: hey selina. thanks for an amazing review hun. this was sort of picked up from nowhere - i just got this image of the two of them in this situation, but to tell you the truth, i am considering writing more, either prequel or sequel, but i dunno yet. but i do know what you are saying- there was an absence of background in this.
and no offence meant at all hun - thats an incredible compliment actually. writing fanfic...i have written so much now that i am beginning to worry i am recycling, and i guess i am in a way, but i understand what you mean about expansion. its something i am trying with a few of my newer fics - different characters, more OC's and different eras. i just find the post-hogwarts the easiest to write, lol. that my writing draws you more than the plot - i actually don't mind that at all ^_^ fanfic, to me, is purely writing practise - i will never make it my life, whereas my original work...that is much more important.
aww thank you. i have fun with my banners. i will sometimes make several before the right one for the fic pops up.
thanks selina!! i really appreciate your comments!! Report Review
What lust! Gorgeously written, as usual. I love the way you wrote out the love/hate feelings they both had, and Hermione's primary reluctance to have Blaise kiss her. Actually, I love the way you wrote everything. No angst in this whatsoever! *round of applause* I mean, I knew you could do it, what with "Let Me Count the Ways", but this was just as good, if not better.
And speaking of LMCTW, I think that this fic could just as easily have been a Lily/James. Did you choose the characters last minute or had you pre-planned it all?
And now, I want you to write a Sirius/Lily one-shot. Hehe. You think you're up to the challenge?
xAuthor's Response: hey sweetie!! heehehe thank you! i know - proud of me?? i am! lol it was hard to write without my regular dose of deep despair! i had the characters planned for this - the fic came to me fully formed in an instant.
ahhh a sirilily!! i have been thinking about it...i may take you up on that challenge, lol. i'll let ya know ^_^
thanks darling!! Report Review
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