This was a great idea. I love it. However I thought that you could have possibly delved into Neville's emotions a little more and that goes for the rest of the characters also. Other than that I thought it was well written.Author's Response: Thank you! And I understand what you're saying about the character's emotions: I definitley plan to go really deep into all of that in the upcoming chapters. I just really wanted to set everything up here. Thanks for your review! Report Review
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