And exactly who would that be, Lily dear? -wink- Report Review
It's not Remus. The four Marauders are doing it, and James definitely, while he loves him, wouldn't help Remus win over the girl he fancies if in fact it was the same girl. Think it through, Lily dear. Report Review
Talking to himself now, is he? Well, that's a shame. Terrible he turned out loony, he and Lily would be great. Report Review
Drummers drumming, pipers piping, oh this is going to be great. Report Review
I wonder, do the swans just vanish, or are they stuck there when the lake freezes over again? Report Review
Of course magic, you silly boys. How else could any of you do anything? Report Review
That's hilarious! What a way to use the Cloak, so clever. Report Review
Nah, she's too curious for that. Can't say I blame her. Although why she's so clueless, I haven't the foggiest. Report Review
That's so hilarious. Berets and wine. He doesn't really know what a French hen is, does he? Report Review
Clever! I wonder how long it took him to learn the spell to do it. Report Review
Aw, James! Is he going to give her something from each verse?! Good luck, my man. Report Review
I really enjoyed this story. Nicely done Report Review
I loved it! Sry i didnt review on every chapter but i planed to. Unfortunatly that what happens when the author's story is so good that you just want to keep reading and dont write in the pretty little box at the bottom. sry again. i totally meant to review on every chapter only like i said i forgot. just so you kno though i really did love this story and loved how you did each thing in the song. awesome job over all. Report Review
you put in 6 rings instead of 5
but brilliant anyway Report Review
Aww, cute story. I'm not so sure about how Sirius and Leta ended up as a couple, because he seemed slightly OOC but her feelings were understandable. It was nice to see Lily with a friend who wasn't a gorgeous, Quidditch goddess, who had all the boys after her. I didn't notice Peter as much as I would have liked, I think he should have been around a bit more. It's your story though, so it's your choice to not have him there. Also, I loved, loved, loved the plot. I haven't read anything like this before. It was adorable, especially the part with Remus at the end. Remus being worried about leading Lily on seemed to be completely like a thing he would worry about. Good job! =) [Sorry this is rather jumbled, I wrote things as they came to me so it's not really flowing. I hope you can understand all of my ideas and comments without any real flow between them!] Report Review
amazing!my exclamation points aren't coming ! Report Review
this ieez a good book i really like story Report Review
hi I GOT A CORRECTION FOR YOU
the song goes like this starting at the 8th day
8 maids a milking
9 drummers drumming
10 pipers piping
11 ladys dancing
12 lords a leaping
u might want 2 correct that so ur story sounds right! Good Luck with ur story!Author's Response: Thanks but YOU'RE COMPLETELY WRONG!!
Sorry, had to do it.
But it's true.
-shrugs- Report Review
I Loved this story! I couldn't stop reading it. : ) Perfect ending Report Review
that was completely b-e-a-utiful! i loved this story, it was so beautiful, and so well writen, you have done a fantastic job! the banner is very gorgous and that is what originally drew me to open this story, now i love it! Report Review
okay, for the record, i did actually read this on christmas, but since then everything's been crazy so i only got to review it now. sorry :(. anyways, that was very very good, and i liked the way it ended. congrats on finishing- i think you finished in record time. haha. very sweet ending- i loved how you included all the other characters to wrap everything up. the part about waking up to drummers was very funny, i dont think i would have like that either. anyways, really really good job, and i hope you had a merry christmas!
~windyAuthor's Response: That's fine windy hehe I understand. I'm so glad everyone seems to like the ending...I was slightly worried.
The drummers were a late night idea of mine so I'm glad it turned out alright.
Thanks dear for being such an amazing reviewer! Report Review
I have loved this story all the way through and i kind of sad that it has had to end it was really cute and the last paragraph has had me in tears lol Merry belated Christmas and a Happy New Year and all the happiness it brings
Emma KathrynAuthor's Response: I'm glad it's finished but at the same time, kind of sad. Thanks Emma and a Happy New Year to you too! Report Review
If you rewrite any chapter you willl be destroying a classic. This is so imaginative.
Happy Holidays!!!Author's Response: Okay, I won't rewrite any! That's easy enough to agree to =)
Happy New Year! Report Review
very cute! good ending too! but poor little Remus needs a girlfriend, I think.
:]Author's Response: Remus does need a girlfriend which is why I'm writing A Deafening Silence! Hehe. Report Review
fluffy it may be, but awesome all the sameAuthor's Response: Oh good!
Thanks =) Report Review
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