“hahahahaha-teeheheheheee, oh my gosh that is so hehehehe funny, Professor!! You make such great jokes!! Hahahaha!! See, look I’m still laughing!! Hahahahehehehe!! Good one, good one. HAHAHAHA!!” I slapped my knee to emphasize the laughter.

FANTASTICO! WRITE MORE!

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Flipper? well, it's at least creative, you've got to give James that.

I love the story. Adding it to Favourites. And, update soon, please?

~ BonnieWritter

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the like the last line. 'For the first time ever, he called me Lily.' that would bug me too, if i was her.

i love it. too much cologne for sure. i'd one, hate to smell it and two feel very sorry for the rest of the people who did.

keep up the good work. 10/10.

~ BonnieWritter

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Never call a girl Fat. Good tip to anyone.

about the story. i really liked it.

no, i love it.

the idea especially.

keep up the good work.

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I hate it too when guys give out nicknames...espcially if they are not your best friend or something. Just ugg.

Anyways, please update soon. I am loving the story so far.

Author's Response: Thanks so much.....this is based on a true story

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This story is so cute!
I love it.
Please update soon. ;)

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Could be smoother. This is about Lily and James, not Lily, James, Peter, Sirius, Lily's friends, other students and other teachers. Stick Lils and Prongs in a room together and see what happens.

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Hey! That was a great chappie! And nicknames are never cute. They're funny, but only when you have a say in them. It's like you're talking about someone and you use their nickname and no one knows who you're talking about. That's hilarious.
Can't wait for more!
Lots of love,
Tanya

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Cool story plot! looking forward to more soon :) 10/10

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Another nice chapter. I loved it! And it is so true about the nicknames.

Lily was so great in this chapter. Especially about being late. I can so see her like that. I guess I can only suggest that you make the chapters a little longer. I know that I would read more if you wrote it. =D.

update soon, please.

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I agreee totally with all your things in this coz this is cool :)

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Funny chapter! This story is going great, but you might want to work on your titles. Post more soon! =)

Author's Response: I know, my titles suck :)

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This is a great idea for a fic! Its so fun to read! I love the first two chapters! Keep up the awesome work! =)

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Sorry it took so long for me to review, but I seriously am gonna have to agree with you on this one. I hate walking down the halls and then suddenly wafting in the smell of someone who used way TOO much cologne. ugg. Anyways, I think that you should take this story further than you are planning to, but for now, please update soon. I am anxious to see what you will write next. ;D. You got me laughing at least, so that is a good sign. See you soon.

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WRITE MORE!

It's SO GOOD!

PLEASE?

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Ok I found it funny but what was with Sirius randomly being in love McGonagall? Loved it PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

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HA! That's actually Hilarious...what's a size five in British sizes...does anyone reading this know?!

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so funny . please keep writing

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As a girl i completly agree with this list so far i hope you update soon!!!

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awww i like the end! haha, too much cologne!!!

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great start! on to chappie 2...

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SO TRUE! Oh my god, it's so true. Somebody should write a book like this. God, guys so need to get this stuff into their heads that if they wear too much of the stuff they WILL smell like a fire in a perfume factory, and they WILL make the rest of the school high on chemicals.

Anyway. Ignore my rambling. 10/10

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"MARRY ME!!"
Oh my merlin, i just cracked up laughing
*shakes head* typical sirius!! LOL.
Keep writing more!! More chapters, I tell ya, I wanna read them all!
Love Sillylily :P

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Ha! I loved this chapter! It's true, I know TONS of guys who wear WAY too much cologne and it smells terrible. But I also sat beside this guy and he smelt even worse than that I had this theory that he never showered... total turn off. Here's another one, the guys who NEVER stop talking I know a lot of those. Great chapter!
Can't wait for more!
-Tanya:)

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Ha! That was funny and totally true! I hate it when guys say your fat, especially when you aren't!
-Tanya:)

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