I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE,MORE,MORE! (angelic smile) Pleassse?Author's Response: Im gonna try to write more on all my stories! I just havent had time in SOo long thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
Really quite inventive i luv it.Author's Response: Thanks the next chapter should be up soon Report Review
Oh I loved it!
I love the movie and the marauders so this to me is a great story so far!
PLEASE write more!
~prongslover13~Author's Response: Thanks i actually just got a new computer my last one totaly crashed so im trying to update all my stories as soon as i can! Report Review
I love this! The Little Mermaid was one of my favorite moives but i never thought about it being Lily and James before. Great idea! I really like it! It's really good. I give you a 9 out of 10Author's Response: Thanks i actually just got a new computer my last one totaly crashed so im trying to update all my stories as soon as i can! Report Review
wow that was awsome. god it brings back so many memories...i remember that eposode!!! oh im getting all nostalgic. That was really good and i think the combining of concepts *i sound really.technical* worked out well.UPDATE ASAP.xxx lucieeAuthor's Response: lol thanks for reading it! i will update Report Review
Aw I love The Little Mermaid. It was one of my favorite movies when I was little. I hope you update soon!Author's Response: I still love the little mermaid and i was watching it the night i wrote the story and was all !! Ariel= red hair=Lily lol so i was all good idea thanks for reviewing Report Review
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