Why? Why? Why? Why? Why, why, why, why, why, why?!
-Parvati Report Review
I always liked this story! Hey how do you become a trusted author? Report Review
I LOVED this story. I never was really into Tonks/Snape stories, but this one got me into the ship.
Great job. This is seriously one of my favorites.Author's Response: *cheers* another convert.... please continue reading and write some too. There are people who are drying for more Sevadora stories out there.. Report Review
I loved that stori sooo much. you have opened my eyes... not only do i love tonks/lupin but i also love (THANKS TO U) tonks/Snape!
This stori as so well written, and it's really sad that it is finished :(
But i love it none the less :)
lol well done
*Nymph*Author's Response: Cool. I love converting people. My goal is for the ship to have it's own category on the story page... it's a long way off but still...
Thanks so much for reviewing... Report Review
A fantastic finish to a wonderful story... it wasnt too corny or sappy, it was just right for Sev and Dora...
I'm very satisfied but i will really miss this story... i've been with it since day one. This story just goes to show how much i love your writing and how much i love Sevadora... thanks to you by the way...
Thankyou for this incredibly touching and at times heart wrenching story, and i like that they all said the 'antiquated hoax' line... very imaginative and very cute... I didnt imagine Dora would say it to Remus though...
Alls well that ends well i suppose... I'll really miss the updates of this story, just like i miss the updates of Little Nymph. At least no one died in this... and one final question... did they have little sevadora's?
BronAuthor's Response: It was hard work... I'm happy I finished it though. And in just ten chapters. I haven't been able to do that ages. Once I'm almost finish with Flowers. I'll start to post anoter story... Snape and Tonks again but it will be in two stories that take place simultaniously. The first one will be Harry/Ginny and the second will be Snape/ Tonks.They will compliment each other. These two stories are my way of getting Harry/ginny fans (I know there are a significant number of thsoe ) to read Snapt/Tonks stories. It will be difficult to follow one without reading the other. So Muhahaha... I'll make this ship popular if its the last thing I do..
And thanks again for being such a loyal reader an reviewer.
And eventually they got married and had some kids... who were perfectly normal... unlike Abel. Report Review
Okay, so nice story, but I have this problem with Flowers., you see, I like them much more, so its difficult to say something positive about this one when I know you're able to write like that...So I liked it enough, but you can do better. :)Author's Response: Thanks agian for the review and the honesty. It's so odd when I started to write flowers I thought it sucked... but a lot of people tell me it's my best. So I'll try harder with the other story I have in mind... it's another Snape/Tonks where Tonks is not that Tonksish...hehe. Report Review
I love this story. I think it is Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. I want to see the end. I also have a question that has been bugging me for a bit. First I am assuming that the oldest son is with Chelsea. But why did she have to leave.Author's Response: Would you believe that you're the first person to ask me thatt...lol. I know why she left but I'm having a hard time working it in and I'm already almost finished writing the last chapter.... If I can't get it in then I'll just say it before I start the chapter.
Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
more more more! this is so well written i love this story line! i have to no what is going on!
MORE MORE MORE!
tonks betta have a go at remus ( i can't believe i'm saying that!)
But she has to get with snape(OMG I DON'T BELIEVE I'M SAYING THAT!) but he really loves her!
PLZ UPDATE... now would be good! lol
*Nymph*Author's Response: AWWW thank you so much. I can tell your a remus/tonks fan so it means a lot that you like this story. I can't wait to write the next chapter. Granted it will be the last though. Report Review
Well, really, I don't see why is she all wrought up because of this...I would understand if it was the other way round, Remus telling her that his wife left him and seducing her, and then her finding out that she was in Portugal with her dying mother...But like this, it's unpleasant, certainly, but not really a tragedy, is it?Author's Response: Hmm how can I explain this... she's angry because he didn't tell her... he was ashamed to tell her and to her it looked like he was trying to get her back, which is horrible in her mind because of what he did. It would be like he was taking second best. And then Snape not telling her either makes it worse becasue it seems like they are like messing with her.... Does that make any sense. Report Review
Aw. No! STUPID REMUS!
Sorry. I just had to say that. As I'm sure you can tell by the first line of this review I like this story. A lot. Well done and keep writing.Author's Response: yeah.... Remus is messing things up for Snape a whole lot... oh is he... hmm. Report Review
Toonmili, HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?
i hate that dora is so bloody stubborn! why cant she just fall into his arms? grrr well, apart from the fact that i'm a little angry right now, that was a really great chapter. I loved the bit with the song... by the way, what is the name of that song? I really love your style of writing in this and i cant believe that this long running story is almost over!! its definately one of the best HP related stories EVER and i just want to know what happens in the end...
All in all, a really great chapter, and i'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapters
BronAuthor's Response: Yes, I knew this would be a painful one for you but it just had to happen.
I'm so horrible. I forgot to credit the song.
It's, Dream by Forest for the trees.
The last chapter should be nice and long.
And thanks again. You always review...
I'll give you a good ending (hopefully). lol Report Review
WOW! Keep it up. This is the 1 of the best story I have read lately.Author's Response: thanks... I'll try my best Report Review
and that is why you are my favourite author! I'm meant to be doing cello practise, but all i can do is read your stories. I am truly incapable of turning down an opportunity look at your new work! A great chapter, and lots of nice description. I like the fact that Severus has finally realised Dora is a woman now! and that Dora has realised Sev can love!
i'm just so happy now! 10/10Author's Response: Awww... Snape and Dora... how cute... I think I'm almost done with this story.... Ten chaters will do fine....
So happy you took the time to read it. I had bundles of fun writing it. Report Review
oh no, dont make them have a fight! just when i thought they'd get together...
sorry about not reviewing before, i actually really like your story and this pairingAuthor's Response: it's not so much a fight than they deciding to spend time away from eachother.
And I am sooooo happy like this pairing... please if you write fiction, write some of your own... I'm trying to get it a separate pairing on the list of pairings.
And thanks so much for reviewing. Report Review
but... you cant! maybe its like the perfect antique hoax, like in Pride and Prejudice... hmmm thats what i hope... Sev is so annoying! and Dora is so stubborn!
arent they just made for each other? LOL
i liked this chapter a lot, but i hated the ending, mainly cause i want them to be together but apart from that it was really good.
9/10Author's Response: Ha, I knew you would hate the ending but it had to happen, or else the story would be too perfect...
I love writing complications before the happy ending... it's fun.
Thanks for reviewing again. Report Review
WOW! Ok Ok is she going to be with Snape or Lupin. This is getting good. Really Really Really GOOD.Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
I absolutely loved this chapter, it had so much feeling in it and emotions that it was just breathtaking. The chapter really highlighted just how much Tonks has matured and shows that she is not that little girl Severus taught anymore. It was really heart warming and amazing the rare emotion and tone of the whole chapter was flawless.
Perfection again my dear 100/10 =) Keep up the amazing work!Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it, I thought people wouldn't like it as much because there wasn't much dialougue but you still liked it. I'm really happy you liked the feel of it, that was important. With this story I'm always playing up the emotional aspect and trying to make them as complex as possible.
Thank again for reviewing. Report Review
i agree that is the perfect place to end, although i wish it wasnt! man, why does snape always have to be drunk for him to show his love? it annoys me so much! Remus is such an annoying character in this story... maybe its just me but after reading all your stories i actually want Snape and Dora to be together just because they are such a better couple... They are so cute together and now i think ew when someone mentions Remus and Dora... oh well. I can actually believe that Remus' wife left him but now i want to know why! You're so lucky, all your stories seem to be validated at once! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of all three of your new stories, especially this one... Remus is so bitter! “The thing about happy endings that he doesn’t understand is that it only happens in fairy tales, it’s an antiquated hoax.”
Maybe thats the way you want him to be, and if it is you're doing a really good job of it! Well done! the latest chapter of my Sevadora fic has been validated!Author's Response: Oh well he wasn't drunk... he was just slightly lacking proper judgement, it was a mixture of things that made him do it, what she said, the fact that he missed her and he just wanted to sort of mark his territory. I couldn't think of a way to write these reasons in... he was just using that as an excuse.
Oh yes yes you think Remus is annoying... I'm doing my job, you hate the obstacle. And you now like she ship more than the one in the book. *cheers*. Me too. I was never a big Remus and Tonks fan, in fact to tell you the truth, I'm not much of a Remus fan, he's just to....sappy for me.
Yeah... Remus is bitter, they all are. I'll have all of them use that Hoax line. Snape used, Remus used it and now it's left for Tonks to use it.
And I look forward to reading your Sevadora fic. I really lobe how a long road to ruin is going. I loved the last chapter. Report Review
Whew... that was a wonderful... great...exciting chapter. Can't wait to read more. Keep it up.Author's Response: Exciting indeed. I had three big things happen so I knew you all would like it. And thanks so much for the review. Report Review
I love this chapter =) It was so deep and Snape was great in it hehe. *Happily Sighs* oh how I love your Snape/Tonks stories they are just perfect. It is nice once in a while to see Tonks get the happy ending since most Lupin stories make her look bad which I totally hate. I love your work it is just so refreshing and top class, keep up the good work and never stop writing Snape/Tonks, your way too awesome to give up!Author's Response: Aww thanks so much. I love Happy endings too (but with a twist).
Top class *blushes*....
I promise I will never stop writing Snape and Tonks, infact I have already started a new one. I won't post it until I'm finished with the two I have going now... but I can't wait to get it up...
Thanks for all your support. Report Review
Very cool... i just wish they would both hurry up and figure each other out, then again, i have just read Jane Eyre so i need some fast paced literature to excite me. I dont like that Tonks has given up on love, cause its obviously sitting right in front of her. thats my interpretaion anyway..
a very good chapter, and once again i wish it was longer. thats my only criticism really, and its only cause i want to read more and not have to wait. once again, congrats on gettign trusted author status, i can really see why you have it when i look back on your stories.
9/10Author's Response: I loved Jane Eyre... My Rochester reminds me of Snape soooo much. I think that was my main inspiration on dealing with with Snape's feelings in Little Nymph. ( I think I was reading that book around that time).
Tonks gave up on love...for now. They have all become a bit cynical.
I made it sooo long for you. I was ready to stop but I thought... I think Bron would like a little more... an you still think it's too short... *sigh*. Next chapter A LOT will start happening. A LOT of revalations will be made about Who is doing what.
And thanks again for the kind words...
you are so nice. Report Review
i just want to read more!
a good chapter, but there just isnt enough of it!
what new material? i'm very excited about the next chapter!
i have posted the first chapter of my snapadora fic but it might be a bit til its validated cause the queue is getting longer... oh well...
a very good chapter, i love that snape was making excuses for dora before she could speak for herself... how very protective of him...
indeed, what IS going on with them??
BronAuthor's Response: I'm so happy you liked it. When I posted it, I thought it was too short but it was an appropriate place to end the chapter. I can't wait to read that Sevadora fic. Report Review
oh you annoy me! that was an awesome chapter! how could you leave me hanging like that? is there something more to Remus' relationship? oooh how exciting! i just hope you get the next chapter up soonAuthor's Response: I feel really motivated to update this story now. I wrote this a whle ago and it was while I was reading a lot victorian literature, so my writing style had changed. I tried to write another piece and it didn't have the same feel. So I just put it off for a while. So I'll try again and see how it develops. Report Review
no... how could you say that Snape!?
but snapey loves dora... i hope!
that was a very funny chapter! but i dont think that he will send her away... at least thats what i hope.Author's Response: He he. He had to say that to her because she freaked him out. It hasn't dawned on him yet that she is actually a woman now.
I'm very happy you thought this was funny. Report Review
aww very cute
remus... that bastard. i like it alot more when he's dead adn shes just heartbroken rather than finding that out...
very good.Author's Response: You're so nice to me. you always review. But actually don't think he was being that much of a bastard in this. I had to make him still nice because I planed on putting this as a Tonks/lupin story and a Other paring story. My misson is to get a separate category for Snape and Tonks. Can you imagine that happening.... doesn't seem likely huh?. There are only three other Snape/Tonks writers here and they all vanished after HBP. much less Deathly Hallows. Report Review
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