Just read the whole story. I LOVE IT!! but it hasn't been updated in over a year=( please tell me you haven't abandoned it! that would make me terribly sad!

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O.M.G. i really love this story it's like the 1st day of June and you haven't updated since January! COME ON!!!
I'm dieing here! what does Hermione know about it?
What is in the book?
Are they okay?
Are the darkness mad about losing Rose?
10/10 i wish 100/10 but sadly it doesn't let me do that!
So what i'm saying is.Start updating! Please!
I'll be your best buddy!

Author's Response: I promise I will right after my exams! I'm at Oxford Uni now and I thoroughly underestimated how difficult the work is ;)

I'll update in about two weeks.

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The Lively Hallows? Hmmm. Wonder if that is what it is. And if it is, what will they be? Hope you can updates soon. It's been a while since chapter 17 came out.

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Haha, this is brilliant! I love your plot so far, there's a lot of suspense... You are very original with you characters, too, and that gives them a lot of depth and complexity.

The only problem is that a few chapters back you mentioned Rose and Scorpius knowing each other from Muggle School. I think that in the Epilogue it states that the first time The Weasleys meet (or see, actually) Scorpius is at Platform 9 and 3/4s, during Rose and Albus' first year. So, the Muggle School plot idea, although interesting and creative, is not exactly canon. But that doesn't really matter, since it's a minor detail and doesn't really have to be fixed.

I really like what you have with James and Juliette so far. The part where she was creeping on him while he slept really made me laugh. It shows that no matter how beautiful a person can be on the outside, they still have faults and quirks on the inside.

I also love how you put in this chapter that Ginny was reaching for the kitchen knife. That really made me laugh... she just seems like that type of character.

Anyways, great story and keep up the fantastic work! I'm really dying to know what happens next! 10/10

Author's Response: The point about Rose and Scorpius is a really good point! I forgot that it was indeed the first time they met, on that train station. Sadly, I love that cute part of their relationship too much to actually change it, but kudos on spotting my inaccuracy. If you find any others, please tell me, and if possible I will definitely change them.

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Ah! Update please! I am just waiting to see what is going to happen next.

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A nice chapter...I liked how finally, Huflepuff was made a part of this, although I don't especially like the House.

I'm glad to hear Rose is okay, too.

It was a nasty cliffhanger you did here, but well, I hope it's only about Hermione being frightened because she thinks Rose got hit by the explosion...

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GAH! Please hurry and update, immediately! Or I might die of suspense. No really. Very good story. You should pitch it to J.K. Though during the Quidditch match, you didn't mention the Wood Bouncer prank. I though it was quite funny.

Love J.

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:O
Oh My Goodness
i read this all last night and had to finish the last chapter.
Oh No i hope she isn't dead
Hermione can't die, she's hermione :S
Welldone! Next Chaptter !

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the riddle, well parts of it are quite clear. For example, the Elder obviously refers to the Elder Wand. Or the Death Stick. Whatever you'd like to call it. The Legacy is obviously the new weapon. The Harry of the future. Courage refers to Gryffindors, since they are always mentioned as being the brave ones. I'm sure there's more, but perhaps we havent heard it yet.

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Whoa. I thought i'd leave a comment at this chapter here (mostly because of homework and hygiene - otherwise, i'd continue reading). ANYWAYS, this is honestly the most refreshingly thrilling and fantastically written story i've read in a LONG time. I haven't really been on HPFF in a while, and let me just say how grateful i am to have found your story! Though, i'm also a little angry. I stopped going to HPFF because it distracted me from my homework - but now your story alone will be distracting me from my LIFE for who knows how long :P :P Lastly, and even though this complimetn may sound weird, i absolutely love how your story jumps off my computer screen. Everything -your characters, plot and writing style - is so fluid that i just love reading this out loud. (I've even begun acting it out through a narrative voice. haha.seriously, though.)

Just thought the story deserved it's dues.
-Lauren

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“Is there anything you would like to tell me, Albus?”

i preety much creqmed at this referance
it shows Mcgonnagals transision from teacher to head, draws parralels to Harry and albus not to mention the crazy role reversal implied with albus' namesake

AWESOME XD

Well crafted, best chapter yet

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its easy, i think. okay legacy is... the black family tree, victoree is beauty,so shell die... whateva... ill figure it out

great story btw

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gahhh maroon 5...

well writen though! ima keep going...

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OMG i cant believe u updated this chapter is so deep i really weanna know what fern was going to say.

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Oooh this chapter was very intense. I always love action bits and I think you wrote it extremely well and I enjoyed the two points of view. I must say I am quite fond of Fern, she's a great character. Excellent job on your story so far, can't wait to read more.

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Your story is delightfully original, with a lovely blend of historicity and change. You have a compelling story and believably well-developed characters -- you don't use the canon as a crutch for your own writing.

Please don't rush the next installment. :)

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May I just say that your story is incredible. You have a fantastic plot and awesome character development, I absolutly love it. You are very talented and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now, but I really wanted to just keep reading :D. One of the best next-generation fics I have ever come across, and if you ever abandon this story I will be horribly depressed. Thank you for the amazing story and I hope you update quite quickly.
Sincerely,
xtimexturnerx

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter... you won't be disappointed. Thanks for the awesome review!

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Oh please, don't make Lily be a traitor! I like the girl! :D

I like how you're playing with the fact that Weasleys used to be complete outsiders and now they are the elite...I don't think that's how JKR imagined it, but I really like it. (Maybe that's because I'm snobbish, too. :D)

And I'm very sorry for Rose, I liked her so much!

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it was interesting, great job :)

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that was intense...great job though :)

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Would it be too generic if I just said I absolutely love you and your fics? I've just come across this today (I still can't believe how I missed this) and I couldn't stop reading -- I tried, so I would have something to read later on, but to no avail. It's too addicting. :D Your Rose and Scorpius are freakin' awesome.

Forgive the lack of constructive criticism in this review. Bias has clouded my judgment -- all I can do now is gush over every little thing and why it's so amazing.

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Yay! I was afraid you'd been discouraged by the lack of reviews.

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i luv dis story... pls complete it!!!

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Wow, I randomly turn to a page in the Rose/Scorpious Fan-Fictions and I come across this. Lovely story and I'm glad I found it. It is amazingly written and kudo's to you for your amazing writting talents and literary ability. I can't wait for the next update and I do hope it is soon as I have added this to my list of favorites that I keep up with. ^^

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wow. this story is like pretty much AMAZING. i love it.
and can i make you a new banner?
in case you didnt know, im seng, the girl who made your banner.
and now that i see it agian...it lookss.horrifying. well, to me.
oh can i? make you a new banner??? please email me at twimoon_eat_world@yahoo.com

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