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Review #1, by soniccyanide Meet Me by the Lake

22nd August 2011:
It was sweet, nice and simple. :)
I just have a problem with the grammar and spelling! If you'd like, I really wouldn't mind correcting it for you and you can post this again!

Author's Response: Hi there:D
First, I'm so sorry that I didn't get back to you erlier. I've been so busy, so I havn't really been in here :'(

Anyway, if you're still interesting in correcting my story(ies) please let me know, that would be absolutly wonderful! You can find my mail in the profile text please mail me ;D

Also I'm so happy that you like both of my stories, it truely means a lot to me! So for that I'm thankfull


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Review #2, by IluvHarryHermione Meet Me by the Lake

4th February 2009:
that was rally cute i just LOVE dramione!=)

Author's Response: Thank you so much (:

Yeah me two! It's the best (:


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Review #3, by Voldabunny Meet Me by the Lake

14th January 2009:
Eh, I read about a paragraph, and think you need to use better wording. I really like the story idea though. Just, don't say "made their homework" sounds weird. I'll keep reading, and when i'm finished, you will see...

Author's Response: Yeah I know ^-^' I need to work on my english. Man I am really in a need of a beta-reader (:

Besides that I'm glad you like the idea, and thanks for reviewing (:


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Review #4, by Elvira Meet Me by the Lake

10th January 2009:
Great story! I'm not really into the really looong stories, so this was great (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much (: I'm really glad that you like it (:

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Review #5, by comeon359 Meet Me by the Lake

9th January 2009:
it was really gd and if yu decide t follow it up with a sequel then i will deffinatly read it.

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much (:
I have thought about making a sequel actually, but I got about 3 other HP stories going on, so I just need to finish them first (:


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Review #6, by lou Meet Me by the Lake

19th May 2008:
well maybe it was your first dramione fic but it was really good...i liked..so keep going if yiou feel likeit
hugs
lou

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! And I will no doubt there^^

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Review #7, by WhiteLilly15 Meet Me by the Lake

17th May 2008:
hey, i love this story! i really do. hey i am in desperate need of some banners for my stories, Broken Hearts Mend With Time, Angel in Disguise, and He Said She Said. i would love it if u could make some for me. i have no special request so be creative and just do what u want with them. i noticed a few grammer erros but other than that it was a great story. Good job. 10/10

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my story. I would love to make some banners for you!

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Review #8, by Motare Meet Me by the Lake

16th May 2008:
Hej :)
Nu ved jeg ikke om det er tilladt at skrive paa et andet sprog... men ja... :P
hvor gammel er du?

Hi
I don't know if it is allowed to write in other languages in here but... here goes nothing... :P
How old are you?
I thought it best to translate this so I wouldn't get banned or anything.. haha.

Author's Response: hehe nej hvor grinern at skrive med en anden dansker herinde:-P jeg er 21 hvorfor da? Translation: funny thing to write to another danish person in here:-) I'm 21, why?

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Review #9, by sin4uxxx Meet Me by the Lake

7th May 2008:
i like it, really good... but why the story is called drama? there was nothing dramatical. if you want you can read my story

-you mustn't love him -

Author's Response: Thank you very much^-^ I called it Drama because I didn't know where else to put it^-^ I would love to read your story as soon as I got the time^-^

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Review #10, by Lorellai Meet Me by the Lake

5th May 2008:
I love it ! WANT IT ! WANT DRACO! lol

Author's Response: Thank you so much^-^ And yeah, me too, his just HOT! lol

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Review #11, by AussieAnatomy627 Meet Me by the Lake

5th May 2008:
I would love to beta your story for you. Email me at aleeshathegreat@yahoo.com.

For someone who doesn't speak english, this is phenomenal.

Author's Response: Really?? That would be so cool! I'll mail the story to you^-^

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Review #12, by manohari Meet Me by the Lake

3rd May 2008:
short and sweet, this is how i describe it.I really liked it was a very good attempt.

Author's Response: Thank you so much^-^

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Review #13, by awsomous Meet Me by the Lake

2nd May 2008:
that was cool. i love draco and hermione stories they are the best. they were the couple meant to happen that didn't

Author's Response: Thank you^-^ Yeah, I couldn't agree more^-^

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Review #14, by Yami Meet Me by the Lake

2nd May 2008:
MORE CHAPTERS PLZ! this is good

Author's Response: Thank you so much^^ I don't know yet if there will be more chapters, I won't say yes but I won't say no either^^ But first I have to concentrate on the new story I'm working on:-)

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Review #15, by jina Meet Me by the Lake

2nd May 2008:
make homework? i'm sorry but that just threw me off completely.*blinks* MAKE homework?

Author's Response: Ehm... Sorry... I guess, well my english isn't that good, I know...

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Review #16, by Christy Meet Me by the Lake

2nd May 2008:
I really liked the plot of the story. the only bad part about it was the english itself was distacting because of the mistakes. maybe you could find someone to read over it for you? or maybe read it out loud to yourself to see if it makes sense. but really, i loved the story

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Yeah I know, I have to get someone to read it over for me:-) But I'm so glad you like it!

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Review #17, by lmichelle_09 Meet Me by the Lake

1st May 2008:
hey! lol i liked it, it was so awesome! especially if it was ure 1st i liked the ending it was shocking to know that Ron and Harry were there the whole time, i would have never guessed! love it though, thanx for the read! bye

Author's Response: Thank you so much *BIG SMILE*

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Review #18, by ScarlettxHearts Meet Me by the Lake

26th April 2008:
very good for your first story.
and considering english isn't your first language the grammer and spelling is good.
i loved the story and would love to see a sequal.


Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really glad that you like it^^

I haven't thought of a sequal yet, but maybe there will be^^ But first I have to get the new story I'm working on done so I can post it, s keep an eye open for that^^


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Review #19, by WHATIF_booksarecool Meet Me by the Lake

23rd April 2008:
Aggh, I love this story! 10/10! You might say it's pointless, but I love it so much! A fave! (And can you help me with banners?)

Author's Response: Aaw thank you so much for the review^^ I'm so glad you like it! Sure I would love to make a banner for you!

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Review #20, by hebu Meet Me by the Lake

23rd April 2008:
very cute :) some minor mistakes, but just grammar and spelling, things like that. and for english being your second language, i think you did great. gorgeous banner by the way! i'm so awful at making banners, could you make one for my story Should've Taken the Stairs? It's not validated yet though. My email address is papertowels1@gmail.com, but if you can't, it's fine.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the sweet review^^ I'm so glad you like my story and my banner^^ And sure I would love to make one for you!

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Review #21, by prynsesshp Meet Me by the Lake

23rd April 2008:
i liked it and i disliked it at the same time.
~I have a feeling that your first language isn't english because a lot of this sounds like it was directly translated from spanish or italian.
~~Because of this, the characters sounded out of character because of the way they spoke.~
~The plot itself was good but the ending was a little abrupt
~There wasn't anything big in the story and no definite beginning middle and end to the story
~I really think that the actual story is good though

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review:-) I'm very happy that you're honest and tell me what I can do better thank you for that^^ Yeah, I'm from Denmark so english is only my second language:-/ But I'm hoping to find a beta reader to help me correct my stories.

Yeah I know it was kinda pointless, but it was my first fic. so I wanted it to be simple^^

I'm glad for your criticism I'll keep it in mind while I'm writing my new story^^

Thanks a lot and stay cool!


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Review #22, by Tigermusic Meet Me by the Lake

23rd April 2008:
OMG SUCH An AMAZING story...i loved it :)
it was really sweet :D
will there be an seguel on it maybe???

Author's Response: Aaw thank you so much for the review, I'm happy that you like my story! I really haven't thought of it, but yeah maybe, I don't know yet, but first I have to finish my new story "My Destiny" so I can post it, so keep an eye open for that^^

Thanks again!


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Review #23, by silver_and_gold Meet Me by the Lake

23rd April 2008:
this story has a very great storyline but there are a few grammatical errors and the wrong usage of words. 'do homework' not 'make/made homework'
And it's Lavender not Levander. breakfast not breakfirst.
sorry if i sound harsh!!
but other than that the story was fantastic!! Draco was so sweet to Hermione in the end...aaw. =D

great job overall!!
(ur banner is sooo cool!!)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! And don't worry about it, I'm happy that you pointed it out, I'm looking for a beta writer (I think that's the word...) Anyway, I hope I get one soon^^

I'm glad you like my story^^ oh and thanks for the kind words for my banner^^


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Review #24, by Secret Bells Meet Me by the Lake

12th April 2008:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!
LOVED IT!.IT WAS SO SWEET!.YOUR FIRST STORY WAS GREAT...IN MY OPINION ANYWAYS.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ^_^

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! Really, it means a lot to me! Thanks and don't worry I will^-^

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Review #25, by comic_freak Meet Me by the Lake

12th March 2008:
This was pretty good actually. You don't seem to have too many problems with your english. If you need someone to be your beta i'd be glad to help.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Really?? That would be great! My email is. v.hindsberg@gmail.com

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