{reviewid: 2634476, reviewer: 'Mani'}
26th December 2011:
I like the story idea... But your writing is really choppy and the way it is set up is very odd. (not particularly easy to read or follow) I am also sorry to say that there are a lot of misspellings and grammatical errors. It was still perfectly legible, but they make the little spell checker in your head go 'bing'
I would just reccomend cleaning it up.
Very nice plot line though!
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{reviewid: 2081474, reviewer: 'Britney'}
24th March 2009:
hee hee hee! good one! loved it!
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{reviewid: 1954561, reviewer: 'mugglebornwitch_J'}
5th October 2008:
i wanna read a sequel
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{reviewid: 1823403, reviewer: 'MISSUnique'}
8th February 2008:
oh yay sequel! whoop!
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{reviewid: 1796054, reviewer: 'damo'}
18th January 2008:
u didn't spend too long on this did you...
it's kinda crap..
soz.
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{reviewid: 1773791, reviewer: 'EvelynPotter'}
1st January 2008:
that was quite good. looking forward to a sequel..x
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{reviewid: 1768248, reviewer: 'Inspiration'}
28th December 2007:
I couldn't even follow this story. Why was everyone worried about Draco? They don't like him.
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{reviewid: 1745871, reviewer: 'critic'}
9th December 2007:
um
this is crap
no offense
but its pathetic
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{reviewid: 1740274, reviewer: 'Violet'}
5th December 2007:
Draco is Draco. He's a prick and always will be. You need to learn to write him as such. Charcters always stay in character!!! If you want a nicey-nice slash, make an original character.
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{reviewid: 1738629, reviewer: 'Lovely_Slytheriness'}
4th December 2007:
Aww so sweet! I will wait patiently for the sequel! xD
~Linnéa
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{reviewid: 1737791, reviewer: 'jacelen'}
3rd December 2007:
I luv it! this story is awsome!
please keep writing!!!
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{reviewid: 1735870, reviewer: 'paradox'}
2nd December 2007:
No offence but that was weird! I mean weird in a good sense because I liked it but still, weird. I'm happy for Harry and Draco and I am afraid that I must say this ha ha Ginny you don't get Harry! (dances around table before remembering about the sore leg and falls over) I'm sorry but I HATE Ginny don't aske me why because I have no idea. Lovely story will look out for the next one.
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