Awe no! Poor Luna and Draco, but it's so understandable...I just feel bad for them.Author's Response: I know!! I hate that they weren't together at the end! I love them together!!
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hey! i just came from reading your other story, one mistake. All your Draco/Luna stories are really good! including this one! throughout the story i was just like , "come ON Draco!! just go apologise to her already!" LOL. but then, he still didn't. :( but great story! i also loved the ending, though it isn't really much. "Sorry seems to be the hardest word". Though it may seem short and stuff, i felt it gave a lot of impact and a hidden meaning kinda thing. Cause most people may take sorry for granted and say sorry randomly sometimes (i'm one of them, hehe), but sometimes, in hard situations, sorry IS the hardest word.
sry for the long long review!Author's Response: I love Draco/Luna & really enjoy writing about them, so I'm really pleased you've enjoyed reading the stories!
This story does rather make you wanna shove Draco towards Luna doesn't it? lol, but I felt it would ruin the whole thing if I had him say that little word which would probably be very hard for someone like Draco.
You're exactly right! That is what I wanted to convey through the story, as Luna is someone who would really appreciate being told "sorry," whereas Draco really can't bring himself to say the word.
Thanks so much for taking the time to review, sorry it's taken a while to reply to you. Report Review
Hi it's me again reviewing your second story here.
I would like to say that though I like this story it feels a little like I am reading the Severus/ Lily one and I am not sure if that is your intention but wanted to point that out.
With that being said; I really enjoyed this story as it seems to be difficult to write a good songfic and truth be told; I can't seem to write a decent one :( So I admire people who can and I think the characterizations were great and I thank you for sharing your stories. I like the ending line as it really defines the mood for this story.Author's Response: Thanks for deciding to do both!
I don't know if it was my intention or not. I actually wrote this one months before Snape/Lily one, maybe this one was in my head as I worte?? Who knows!?
It is so difficult to write a song fic! At least I find it difficult and I think those who write them often are amazing to do so well with them.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one as well, thanks so much for reviewing. I like the end as well lol. Report Review
Again, you do beatifully at keeping your characters in character. I definitely think as you do that Luna would try to help someone who was being stigmatized like Draco would be. I also think that Draco would have a hard time apologising to her. I see big echoes of Lily/Snape here!
"But she didn't. Luna kept her distance from him and Draco had finally come to the conclusion that she was not going to forgive his outburst very easily. He wasn't a stupid boy, not really, he knew what he had to do, knew what he should say to her, but apologises were not in his nature as a Malfoy and he wasn't sure how to go about it."--This part seems strange to me as it's the only part written in 3rd person omniscient, when the rest is from Draco's omniscient POV.
I also struggled with a songfic, so I know what you mean. I kept messing up the format and getting rejected. In the end, I wrote the piece more for myself than a general audience. (Sorrry, my kitty is demanding attention now.)
I think you kept to the original spirit of the song quite well.Author's Response: Yeah I agree, with certain elements of Draco/Luna there is an echo of Lily/Snape, in the way both parties think and act.
The fic is of course from Draco POV, but as you spotted there was a tiny bit of narration in there. Hopefully though it didn't throw you too much!!
I'm glad there's someone else who struggles with song fics! I had the hardest time writing this, placing the lyrics and everything! Nightmare!
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I was browing the recently added stories and I found this.
I loved it, it's absolutely fabulous! I love Luna and you describe her so well that it's amazing. And I loved how Draco's pride a fear bound him a caused him so much pain. Very touching! Love it! wingsAuthor's Response: I think fear and pride are 2 very important elements of Draco's character and I'm so happy that came across in the fic!
Thanks so much for the lovely comments, I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
OMG noo!! O.ornWhat are you doing fool? get a move on!!rnBe a man O.OrnrnGreat writing. im impressed =Orncan we have more Plz??Author's Response: I rather had the same reaction when I was writing it lol. Didn't you just want to kick Draco up the bum? lol.
I'm so glad you liked it as I haven't written a song fic before. Perhaps I might do a sequel where he finally does be a man?? Report Review
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