cute one- shot. your sirius is so melt-worthy. mmm i want him to myself. lucky dorcas hah

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great one-shot!
loved it.
keep em coming!

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Very nice...10/10

~*~Elle~*~

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Okay, I thought the 'meep' part was hilarious! I could actually hear the way she said it in my mind. Anyway, it was a really enjoyable ficlet, Dorcas was wonderfully characterized: awkward, in denial, realistic. The whole Sirius suddenly snogging her out of the blue was odd but aah well, it was a one-shot after all so you gotta keep things straight to the point sometimes ;). But other than the sudden snog-fest, this was a really well-written ficlet considering you wrote it while you were half-asleep ;p. What really made this fic stand out though was the characterization of Dorcas and her realistic approach. It made the reader feel as if they were there in her thoughts and that's a good thing ;). Good Job! 9/10

~Misty

Author's Response: Haha thanks Misty! I'm glad you think so, I found dorcas very easy to write, after all shes just a normal hormonal girl... Ok maybe not that easy :P Your right about Sirius kissing her, but I'm glad you liked it anyway and it was one of my better halfsleep creations :D Thank you so so much for the fantastic review!

Dixi x

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aww, this was a cute little ficlet! I thought it was absolutely adorable, great job!

Author's Response: I'm glad and thank you summerlove x3 for the review :)

Dixi x

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Beautifully written. 10/10

Please please make a sequel! Or a whole series! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks Estelle Lovegood and I think I will :D

Dixi x

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wow. that was very good. I know this is a short review but I really cant think of anything else to say. I'm speechless! I'm never speechless

Author's Response: Thanks and thats fine, at least you reviewed ;p Thanks very proud ravenclaw for the review. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.

Dixi x

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