It's going good so far! I know it is a pain to get a story started, but your doing fine. This is such a different topic so I don't have much to say. I do have a question though. Is it easier or harder to write a story on a topic noboby has really done before like this?
It could be harder since you can't look at other stories or ask other people for help or ideas. Then it could be easier cause you can do anything with this story and anything with the characters since this is a new topic. I do like the story so far. Are the next few chapters going to be about their journey to Iowa then?
I am glad you chose Iowa and you are talking about it in a nice way. Almost every time I hear something about Iowa, it is a put down. For all of you city people,
IOWA (state) AND CORN ROCKS!!
Anyway, update soon, please!!
110/10Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story so far, and it's good to hear that you think I'm doing a good job getting started, even though I don't. It's actually a mix of easier and harder writing this, but considering it's not what I usually write, it's harder for me.
I think it's harder because I can't really look at other stories to get an idea of what to do. But, in a way it's easier, because I can really do my own thing with it. The next few chapters are going to be about their journey to Iowa, since they can't go directly there without it looking suspicious.
Yeah, the main reason I chose Iowa was to give people a better idea of what it's like. I agree on that put down thing and it gets so annoying! Everyone seems to think of Iowa as a state full of amish hicks, when it's not! I will admit there are some, but not as many as everyone thinks.
IOWA RULES! But, not Iowa state, IOWA HAWKEYES! WOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
i think harry would be more hesitant about talking about sirus but you should defiantly continu thisnone!!Author's Response: Well, Harry wasn't all that hesitent, because he just knew right off the bat that this was Sirius daughter, and he knew there was no way to tell her other then just saying it. I'm working on the next chapter, but I'm having a bit of writers block, but I'll have it out ASAP. Report Review
Good. I never really thought of this subject before, so this was a differnet topic to chose, in a good way I mean. That just means you aren't coping a common idea like alot of people do, so I'm givin you props for that! When I think about it, alot happened in that first chapter. It was a little rushed, but I can't think of anything else to put to make it longer but not making it a chapter or story that doesn't drag on and become boring, so you did a good job still. Anyway, since Sirius is only Harry's godfather, (now, correct me if I'm wrong) Harry and Jazlynn wouldn't be related then, right? Well, I don't really have much to say for this one, and that doesn't mean it's bad or anything. I am just a bit curious on what you are planning on going with this or how it is going to end. Anyway, update soon, please!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks, and no I don't think it's a very common subject. Thanks! If I added mroe to the first chapter than it would just become really boring, and just drag on. No, Harry and Jazlynn aren't related. I'm not really sure how to explain what's going to happen in future chapters without giving it all away. Report Review
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