Hi im nina i like yr story i think u should cont with it...

Author's Response: hi nina, thanks for the review!

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this was amazing! you should definately continue this

Author's Response: Really? Well, I might if I get more than the two reviews I have on this story :) Thanks for the review, though!

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wow that was really good and if it wasn't a oneshot id be begging for u to update!! its that good! but u know, if u wanted to continue with it id be really happy! and im sure others would too! but anyway, its still fabulous! 10/10!

xoxo~lolo

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I already have a bunch of stories going, so if I finish those and other people still want me to continue this, I might.

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I really liked this story. I like fluff. This was good even if it was a bit confusing

p.s. I LOVE soccer. your brother sounds like my brother, on the whole 'sleepover issue'

Author's Response: lol, i love soccer too :) Yeah, he won't admit it, but i think he KNOWS that a sleepover is a sleepover. thanks for the review!

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Great job! I like how the last sentence was a metaphor... :)

Thanks for participating in my challenge. It turned out well.

xo

Author's Response: I saw that a lot of people responded to your challenge! Congrats to you for making such an interesting challenge :) Thanks for reviewing!

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