This was an AMAZING story^_^ i loved it so much!Author's Response: Thanks very much! Report Review
I really like this story...it's one of my favorites...You just capture everyone so well. Great job!
~LilyFireAuthor's Response: aw, thanks so much! I'm not particularly happy with it, but I'm glad you were! Report Review
I'm very impressed with the depth of this story, the feeling in it. Wonderfully put together, the mixing of the lyrics and the story to emphasize certain feelings.Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
Wow, this piece was amazing! Your Tonxs is fantastic, every time you describe a part of her character it just makes me love her more! I espetially like the part of her and Molly fighting, and the bit before that, with Sirius and her was priceless :D
When she said "Now you can touch me" it was really sweet, i liked that moment you created.
I guess you can tell I realy loved this story, its deffinitely one of my favorites! Il have to read more from you!Author's Response: haha, wow, this is so great! Thank you very much! Report Review
Love this - and LOVE the detail that Tonks' middle name is "Theodore". Jeez - Ted must be as crazy as Adromeda to give the poor child a name like that, eh? Well done.
PalomaAuthor's Response: yay, I"m glad you liked it!! Yeah, I figured Andromeda had her bit, so Ted had to be equally cruel. ^_^ Report Review
wonderful as always :)Author's Response: AHHH!!! JEN JEN!! I MISSED YOU!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN YOU HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN FOREVER AHHH!! Oh well, it's not like I don't know where you live! *evil cackle* I mean, *innocent giggle* Report Review
I think you should have tried to make some distinction between the 1995 and the 1997-98 scenes. Otherwise it was quite well-done, though a tinsy bit out of character Remus (I don't think he would have confessed he liked Tonks). But nonetheless good job.Author's Response: yeah, I'm bad with transitions, so I tend to use lyrics as that instead. I'll work on that, thanks for the feedback! Report Review
Aaw, sweetness! That was beautiful, I really loved it! You are really good with song fics/chapters (I've tried, let's not go there) and I know how hard it is. How you find the time to write so much and do it so WELL is a mystery to me.
10/10 I really, really loved the ending and it had me sniffling a little bit. Promise me one thing, NEVER EVER STOP WRITING! Or, I'll track you down and force you to start again *winks*
Great story and just because of the end paragraph I give you another 10Author's Response: oh thanks so much love!! I actually came up with the ending because I lost my plot bunny groove. I was going to have it only in OTP, then thought "hm...how could I make this more depressing?"
Oh, and I promise, I'll NEVER stop writing! It's my passion! I'm going toward a book, actually, but I'm 14 so I've got time. I love you hun!! Report Review
I adored this. Super fantastic.
Big Smiles!!Author's Response: oh thanks i love smiles!!! Report Review
Aw! The last bit had me tearing up. So sweet. Just beautiful. So well written. Well done. A definate 10/10.
Hey, on another note I was wondering whether you wouldn't mind reading my story.
Well done again.Author's Response: thanks so much!! I would love reading your story, I'm always wanting new things to read! Report Review
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