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Review #1, by Rumpelstiltskin Chapter 1: Glance

6th March 2014:
I'm here for Blackout Bingo (number 4/7 of square 3, to keep track).

Does this seriously have no reviews? I'm very excited to be the first then, because this was AWESOME! Even though you may not care for the Marauder's era all that much, I'm in love with it, so this is perfect.

I do like the way you've set this up, as it set's up Leigh's character nicely. Her House pride, her friendship with Lily, and the unrequited love interest with Sirius Black was woven in nicely so that it flowed. Typically, I review as a read, finding a nice stopping point to make a remark in this nice little box, but I found myself reading the entire chapter without stopping, so excuse me if the review is all over the place!

Anyway, James and Lily have Head Boy and Girl, and there's a possible love interest with Remus. So, naturally, I'm very excited to see what happens next! I'll add you to my list so that I can see when you update (and please do)! ♥

Fantastic job!


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