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Review #1, by joojoo Chapter One- Disastrous Beginning

12th January 2008:
wow, am i late or what? I'm here now, though. Please forgive me. I really am honoured to have a fic dedicated to me on here. It means so much!
Now on to the review. Slight techincalities I picked up on: right at the beginning, it;s meant to be "James said exasperatedly" - not exasperated.
But other than that, it's a great start ot what promises to be quite interesting. You have the typical contrasting of the two main characters, who you've already introduced -and introduced well (none of the 'she had flaming red hair and bright green eyes and everyone thought she was amazingly pretty but really she thought she was quite ugly...'). The scene with the Marauders, though perhaps arguably a bit over-sentimental, (im a firm believer in balance when it comes to the question of how much James talked about Lily) are shown well and fit with the whole romantic comedy theme really well. I'm interested to see where you take this!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the challenge! I need to get a beta for this story definately, because I'm often making little mistakes like that.

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Review #2, by Ryans Charming Girl Chapter One- Disastrous Beginning

3rd January 2008:
It's really good! I like the plot so far. Please update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I will be updating soon!

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