Reading Reviews for Teardrops in the Rain
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MissJessx3 Something to Live For

11th February 2008:
good short story. review mine please!

Author's Response: will do. thanks!

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Review #2, by harrylilyjames Something to Live For

3rd February 2008:
awe... poor lily- evil petunia!!
at least James was there for her =]
this was really sweet, just wished it was longer.

Author's Response: i'm working on the length. yea, i kinda like making petunia a total witch(no pun intended) thanks for reviewing!

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Review #3, by patronus_girl Something to Live For

4th December 2007:
that was very sweat, i like the large amount of description you use, especially while you set the scene.

Author's Response: thanks!

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Review #4, by Lillyflower13 Something to Live For

30th November 2007:
short and sweet. matbe a little too short

Author's Response: i try to make it longer, but usually i lose concentration. i'll keep on trying!


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Review #5, by andy Something to Live For

29th November 2007:
i like it a lot. very dramatic and very emotional. it rang true, and I like the way the you ended it with the line about there being something to live for, after all.

keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thank u!


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