{reviewid: 2671710, reviewer: 'Jen'}
13th March 2012:
That's a lot of babies!
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{reviewid: 2389137, reviewer: 'dracomalfoy21'}
3rd August 2010:
gd now just make more
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{reviewid: 2200527, reviewer: '0sweety10'}
21st August 2009:
oh wow lots of kids lol great one shot though i liked it!
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{reviewid: 2018864, reviewer: 'Isabel%20Black'}
28th December 2008:
Very nice little story! Write more, will you?
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{reviewid: 1920916, reviewer: '...wow'}
12th May 2008:
wow gal it was good but went WAY 2 FAST!! SLOW DWN A LIL GAL its was lyk ...will u marry me n shes lyk..yup i mean i woold b lyk...hang on a sec i havn't seen you in lyk 6 yrs n now ur askin me 2 marry u..?? no way buddy!! yer..but other than dat it was fine
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{reviewid: 1863358, reviewer: 'soccerstarfelton'}
14th March 2008:
OMG this is the most awesomest story ever. it is soo cute. but what is with the eight kids and the names from the chronicles of narnia, Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy?
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{reviewid: 1846096, reviewer: 'Wendie'}
27th February 2008:
This was a beautifil story. please make sequal
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{reviewid: 1751986, reviewer: 'lady_gryffindor_slytherin'}
14th December 2007:
Everything was a bit rushed... maybe you should rewrite it with a bit more um...explanations... I think...
Author's Response: I'm thinking of doing a sequal and telling you guys how catherine came about.
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{reviewid: 1745032, reviewer: 'LittleLoveMagic'}
8th December 2007:
Honesty- I know you were probably looking for a fast paced story, but this was just a little to fast. Oh, and I love the Narnia names for the kids!
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1741299, reviewer: 'KeevinLover_9216'}
5th December 2007:
i love the poke at narnia. haha, good story. You shouldn;t have rushed the end. It was still good, but it would have been cool to have them meet up and talk.:) Thanks for the story
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1740373, reviewer: 'lizzy'}
5th December 2007:
good story, but i'm confused, at first you mentioned that hermione slept with draco because she's drunk ..and with the way that u mentioned hermione thought sleeping with draco is like sleeping with her worst enemy... it's confusing with the end of the story draco said about hermione was being her girlfriend... anyway, good story!
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1733400, reviewer: 'Tigermusic'}
30th November 2007:
short.. but wery sweet
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1733257, reviewer: 'miss_riddle'}
30th November 2007:
i really like it but i think we need a bit more info like why did he leave? or why didnt he respond to letters? and finaly a teensy more at the end. the story just stops and i was left going ummm nothing else?
over all it was terrific tho! =D
Author's Response: thanks I think I'll do a sequal about it
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{reviewid: 1733256, reviewer: 'LadyLatina'}
30th November 2007:
nice story, alot of kids
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1732979, reviewer: 'comeon359'}
30th November 2007:
the ending was a bit fast but it was good
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1732902, reviewer: 'mandigrrl'}
30th November 2007:
It was okay. Started out great, then the end seemed really rushed. Good writing. Great idea.
Author's Response: thanks
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