SPELLING AND GRAMMAR ARE IMPORTANT!!!

the plot line is not bad, maybe if you made the ending a little better instead of just "and they all lived happily ever after"

Author's Response: yeah i'm working on the spelling and grammar, but now i have officially gotten my own computer! so no more typing on a tiny I Pod touch!! and as far as the story goes i share an account with my best friend, Kay mia. i'm sarah Artemisia. i'm the only one writing on the site right now, I think she figured that there was nothing else she could add to the story, whether it be a clever writer's device unknown to man or writers block we will never know...

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That was a nice trick that u made Harry do. Can u tell me how to do it so that i can get rid of a boy that won't stop stalking me?

Author's Response: well first of all, congrats! he obviously likes you, either that or he needs a friend. ummm... well first of all you need to assess the situation. if he just needs a friend point out someone you dont like and tell him that they are intrested in him!! no don't do that i'm just kidding!! well hmmm... thats a good one I'll get back to you on that realy realy soon!!

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I liked the story a lot, but i sort of got a bit confused after the "time turner" part. I think a lot of things happend to quickly. But what i did like about this story, is how you wrote some parts about Draco, and some about Harry. That was really interesting, and made the story better.

Author's Response: thanks a lot for your imput. but im not sure about the next time i will update this story because i am currently writing a novle for hpff called And then She Appeared. be sure to check it out.

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54 WHAT! ROTFLH! LOL! TMI! TMZ!

Author's Response: even though i dont know what that means thanks

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I HATE CHO! It's better Harry/Hermione.

Author's Response: right now im working on a story about hermione and harry you should read the chapter when it is validated

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