So powerfully written. Wonderful work.

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so dreadfully heart breaking! poor SEV!!

Author's Response: I\\\'m glad the heartbreaking part came through in the story. I wrote this one while I was going through a rough patch myself.

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oh my god I'm speachless, it was amazing, soo amazing, I can just see it, oh wow, I'm like moved deepley moved. You should write out thier whole story, it'd be a hit.

Author's Response: Hm... that's a thought isn't it. Perhaps later on I will think about writing out their entire story... I'm currently in the middle of writing two right now and I'd like to get those finished and then move on to some other ideas I have before thinking about new stories. Thanks for the idea though, and thanks for the review! I'm glad the story was to your liking, and I'm glad I could portray the emotions of the character so vividly.

-JW.

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Very enduring. This one was very, very good. I thought the shower was a very creative thing to add.

Author's Response: Thanks.

-JW.

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Did you do that deliberately that at first it seems that this is about Lily? So the realisation that it's not Lily confused me. I think it's far too much coincidence that her son is also in Gryffindor and has her eyes. I couldn't really switch from Lily to another woman.
I guess that if you would have made her being Lily, I would have liked this story very much, because it is written very good. I liked the emotional level.

Author's Response: Who the woman is shouldn't matter to us, only to him. In the real books he also didn't have a relationship on that intimate level with Lily. By the time he was 21 Lily was already with James.

If the emotional level seems real, it's because I live this story every day.

Thanks for the review,

-JW.

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