oh... its harry, isnt it???

good - really good. luv it!

chrissy

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I loved this story. It was incredible. Please write a sequel. Keep up the good work!

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That's really good, a bit dark though. Not really what I usually read, but twas very good. Was Seamus the murderer? Cos I wouldn't really think of him as one.

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BLOODY HELL.THAT WAS...WAS...BLOODY BRILLIANT.10/10 HANDS DOWN!

Author's Response: Thanks I currently am writing a sequel titled My Saviour.

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awww. that is so good, i can't believe you never told me about this, well anyways i like it make more! MAKE MORE PLEASE!!! she should go on a journey to find out who her saviour was!

Author's Response: I thought I did tell you about it!

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Wow. Hi, you reviewed my story and asked me to read yours so here I am. This story is kind of hard to follow, but I definitely liked the ending. Honestly this is a great story you have got here, and I think it should stay this length because you have a whole story right here, it doesn't need to be any longer. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!I'm glad you enjoyed my story and were kind enough to review.


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I liked the suspense, and my only problem was that it seemed like you were using 'big words' for the sake of using big words. All in all, it was a good read ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my story.Actually the big words were that way because I originally wrote the story on Word.

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