It made me laugh at the sheer akwardness, great job.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it!

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It was very cute! However, I think you should have made Cedric a lot younger. After all, he has already been a relationship by the time that he is of age. Also, well...I'd say there are few teenaged boys who don't think about it. I really liked how you had Mr. Diggory grumble about having to write him up. That was very cute. Just as a grammar/punctuation note, when you have people addressing each other:

Are you trying to contradict me Mr. Diggory?"
^You always need to have a comma before (or after, depending on the placement) the person's face.
Are you trying to contradict me, Mr. Diggory?

Good job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing those out to me! I will work on those.

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omigosh!! 'ride a broomstick'? That is priceless!!! Hahahahahaha!

Author's Response: Yes, that is a priceless line

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Wow! Those are some uptight parents. Just like in the book for Cedric's dad.

Author's Response: Yes they are uptight

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that was so funny, you could make a part 2 hahahaha :)

Author's Response: Haven't thought about that.

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Have you considered making these a series? They're really fantastic.

Just a favor, can you put that this was for my challenge in your summary? Thanks for taking part in the challenge! :]

Author's Response: I haven't thought about making this into a series.

I didn't put this was in response to your challenge? I would put in my summary right away! I thought that I had had put it in an author's note.

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