{reviewid: 2518473, reviewer: 'jenai%20mayfield'}
7th May 2011:
great start. only a few grammatical errors, but the story is good enough to overshadow that. looking forward to your next chapters!
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{reviewid: 2413121, reviewer: 'Jakota'}
16th September 2010:
Come on! Don't leave it at that!
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{reviewid: 2085395, reviewer: 'Anna'}
29th March 2009:
aw! i love it!
bravo!
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{reviewid: 2043638, reviewer: 'gremlin'}
28th January 2009:
just so you know that last bit with the "last 2 words" you might want to change to 3 words if it matters to you.
I really like it though :)
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{reviewid: 2043633, reviewer: 'gremlin'}
28th January 2009:
I like how this is more to the point, some people go on and on about how nervous they are. I'm glad this one isn't.
I also like Mrs. Weasley's reaction, I think it's more in line with her character.
hope to see more :)
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{reviewid: 1916239, reviewer: 'gabby'}
6th May 2008:
fantastic! That was a brilliant chapter, a tad short, but brilliant! Hope to see more of them... alone.
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{reviewid: 1841991, reviewer: 'Anyomous'}
23rd February 2008:
I like ur approch to this fanfic- its interesting- but good
best of luck 2 u
-anyomous person
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{reviewid: 1814653, reviewer: 'Remember%20Hedwig'}
1st February 2008:
Beautiful! More! More!
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{reviewid: 1785471, reviewer: 'gremlin'}
9th January 2008:
can't you please make more???
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{reviewid: 1760005, reviewer: 'Sahara%20Weasley'}
20th December 2007:
Oh my gosh.
This is a goodie
Write more!
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{reviewid: 1754378, reviewer: 'hgweasley'}
16th December 2007:
great job! post lots more
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{reviewid: 1742502, reviewer: 'xTimexTurnerx'}
6th December 2007:
This story is pretty cute! I'll definatly look out for the updates!
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{reviewid: 1735927, reviewer: 'KayTee'}
2nd December 2007:
luvin it so far
keep goin ron n hermione r made for each other its so cute
:D
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1735738, reviewer: 'mommcgonagall'}
2nd December 2007:
awww, only three chapters? It's sooo nice!
not enough r/hr stories out there, and they're my favourite!
Weasley is STILL our king!
Author's Response: haha, he *so* is!
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{reviewid: 1735710, reviewer: 'Avanell%202'}
2nd December 2007:
Very good story! I love it!!!
Author's Response: Awww! Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1733948, reviewer: 'Chloe_Veillon'}
30th November 2007:
Great Stroy! Please Post soon!
Author's Response: Well, if other people are kind enough, which they are being very awesome, I'll post soon!
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{reviewid: 1733763, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
30th November 2007:
really awesome story, soo cute! =3 You MUST write more, i begg of you! FYI, the suspense is really killing me so post nxt chappie soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!
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{reviewid: 1733474, reviewer: 'HarrysHoney'}
30th November 2007:
write something more
write something more
more
more
more
i say ! lol
Author's Response: The whole story is already writen, I'll post it soon!
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{reviewid: 1733354, reviewer: 'Ron_Hermione_Forever_246'}
30th November 2007:
That was adorable! Especially how he carried her up to his bed =) Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! The reviews make me *SO* very happy!
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{reviewid: 1732978, reviewer: 'Megan_wolff'}
30th November 2007:
Sometimes your sentences don't quite make sense, and your Hermione seems a bit weak lol, but apart from that it was good. I am looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
Author's Response: Yea, I tried to make her weak in this chapter, because I guess fighting in a war tires you out, I'm not sure, but she gets more into character in the next two chapters!
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