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Review #1, by 411Kingsley Those Who Came Before

15th December 2007:
Beautiful, well written, carefully constructed and highly affecting story.

Well done.

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Review #2, by ginwannabe Those Who Came Before

21st November 2007:
That was remarkable. I really enjoyed it. Did you mean to repeat the last paragraph twice, though? I can't tell if it's a typo or if you intended it to reiterate the point, lol. I can see how the reputations of Harry's generations would haunt those in the next. Well done.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The repeated paragraph was a mistake, but I'll pretend it was on purpose so it doesn't look like I wasn't paying attention when I posted. ;)

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Review #3, by katwozere Those Who Came Before

21st November 2007:
That was one of the best one-shots I have ever read!! It was very deep and made you think. 10/10 if there ever was one.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #4, by Leo072491 Those Who Came Before

20th November 2007:
Masterfully done. Phenomonal description, imagry, emotion. I loved it. You did an amazing job. Please keep writing, you're beginng to rival JKR. Truly I am in was wonderful :)

Author's Response: Wow, high praise! Thank you! I'm always amazed when people say such nice things!

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Review #5, by momotwins Those Who Came Before

20th November 2007:
Wow. Just... wow. Excellent, really really excellent. Holy crap. I'm totally speechless at how good this is. It really conveys Al's sense of disconnect and his insecurities. Absolutely amazing. I love your characterization of Lily too, like Ginny but a little Luna thrown in too.

Great line: The only exceptional thing he had ever done was look like his famous father.

You do have the same paragraph in there twice, which I assume is a copy/paste mishap.

Wow, I am still in awe of how good this is. I read it twice over, and I'm favoriting it cause I know I'll want to read it again. This is what everyone's Next Gen's should strive for, this level of excellence. 100/10

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked Lily. I didn't really want her to be exactly like Ginny...I like the comparison to Luna. I'm glad you enjoyed it! (And the repeated paragraph was a mistake :))

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Review #6, by Skai Those Who Came Before

20th November 2007:
Really nice one. Made me think... Good story this is ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! It's good to make people think!

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