Beautiful, well written, carefully constructed and highly affecting story.
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That was remarkable. I really enjoyed it. Did you mean to repeat the last paragraph twice, though? I can't tell if it's a typo or if you intended it to reiterate the point, lol. I can see how the reputations of Harry's generations would haunt those in the next. Well done.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The repeated paragraph was a mistake, but I'll pretend it was on purpose so it doesn't look like I wasn't paying attention when I posted. ;) Report Review
That was one of the best one-shots I have ever read!! It was very deep and made you think. 10/10 if there ever was one.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Masterfully done. Phenomonal description, imagry, emotion. I loved it. You did an amazing job. Please keep writing, you're beginng to rival JKR. Truly I am in awe.it was wonderful :)
Author's Response: Wow, high praise! Thank you! I'm always amazed when people say such nice things! Report Review
Wow. Just... wow. Excellent, really really excellent. Holy crap. I'm totally speechless at how good this is. It really conveys Al's sense of disconnect and his insecurities. Absolutely amazing. I love your characterization of Lily too, like Ginny but a little Luna thrown in too.
Great line: The only exceptional thing he had ever done was look like his famous father.
You do have the same paragraph in there twice, which I assume is a copy/paste mishap.
Wow, I am still in awe of how good this is. I read it twice over, and I'm favoriting it cause I know I'll want to read it again. This is what everyone's Next Gen's should strive for, this level of excellence. 100/10Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked Lily. I didn't really want her to be exactly like Ginny...I like the comparison to Luna. I'm glad you enjoyed it! (And the repeated paragraph was a mistake :)) Report Review
Really nice one. Made me think... Good story this is ;) Author's Response: Thanks! It's good to make people think! Report Review
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