ahh this was so good! i loved your title and i thought the idea and concept of it was really interesting and original
10/10 definitely :)Author's Response: Thank you so much, really appreciate it! And I can tell by your penname you're a Twilight fan, me too :]. Report Review
LOL! That's one of my paramore songs!
This was a great fic. I love your originality. GREAT JOB! :) :) :) You get 10/10
-SheaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comments. Report Review
this one is very sad. I've read some of your other ones and most are humor but its good to see a change every now and then. It's written well but it's also a little Americanized. Good work tho!Author's Response: Yeahhhhhh, well I'm American. It's a bit difficult for me to write not American dilects, I try. Thanks for the review. I'll try to brush up on my British-ness! Report Review
BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!BRAVA!Author's Response: I legit laughed out loud when I read that review. Thanks! Glad you liked it! Report Review
Wow. This is really good. There arent many lily/ james stories that peter is actually included in... Probably cause everybody hates him. I hate him too, who'd ever do THAT to your friends? I'm ac ting like it's real. XD
10/10Author's Response: Haha! My and my friend get in like these in-depth arguments about characters and one of us will stop and be like 'We're acting like this is real.' I really strongly hate him... with a passion. Thanks for reviewing so much! Report Review
OUCH. that's so cold!
it was bloody brilliant though!
ahh lily's and james' death makes me so sad, to imagine how Sirius and Remus lived the rest of their lives.Author's Response: I know what you mean. I tried to picture myself in Sirius' shoes. I was like 'wow. that would utterly suck.' Thank you for reviwing. Report Review
amazing. absolutely amazing. lovelovelove it Report Review
EVERYTHING MAKES SENSE!!! YOUR SUCH A GENIUS!!! I CANT WAIT TO READ YOUR OTHER STORIES!!! You should check out mine: A Dodecahedron of Love. Then COMING SOON: A Dodecahedron of Theme Songs. Good fun.
10/10 Report Review
Okay, yep, I am being the first review to my own story. :P. I think it's funny. OKAY people, it doesn't take long to review, so please do so. If you say it sucks, I don't care, actually, it kind of makes me laugh...so anyway! Review. Please. Thank you. Report Review
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